Can I?

TheVlama

In the darkness I see the dazzling gold
Whispers of the unspoken node
Can I feather your joy in my heart?
For the sake of a lovely scar.

  • Author: TheVlama (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 22nd, 2025 11:58
  • Comment from author about the poem: The word "feather" i used here is instead of "write down". So, i could give it a more ethereal feeling.
  • Category: Love
  • Views: 11
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  • sorenbarrett

    A very poetic statement of love. Nicely done

  • Poetic Licence

    Nicely crafted write of love, enjoyed the read



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