Stars beyond reach,
Shining in their own light,
But not mine to claim on this beach,
A distance stretching through the night.
Words are caught within my throat,
Conversations running on repeat,
These buried emotions will soon float,
As I sit on this empty street.
The universe—so big,
But yet my eye caught you,
It felt so real and quick,
I never searched or knew.
A galaxy within your soul,
And I'm a planet around a lost orbit,
Waiting to catch your lane whole,
Hoping this ride won’t make me split.
Amidst the chaos and blurred visions,
A single flicker, time slowing down,
In this moment, a perfect collision,
In heavy tides over me, I drown.
You are my milky way,
And I am a part of the vast space,
I will find you and commence play,
While time plays this slow race.
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Comments5
This is sure a successful poem, written from inspiration of a rare kind. We see the image of the poet chasing after the love of which he is a slave. He is caught in an orbit and keeps trying to rendez-vous with his love. From the earth, he has launched himself into orbit, in pursuit of his love that has gone away from him.
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Yes Sir absolutely right but I am a girl... it's alright though, my profile is an anime guy. But I wouldn't say she is a slave...
Also thanks for reading my poem
Superbly written🕊️🙏🏻
Thanks so much for reading
You are most welcome 🙏🏻🕊️
A poem where the cosmos becomes part of the metaphor of chase. Lovely
Yes also thanks for reading my poem
A wonderfully written write, very enjoyable to read
Thanks so much
You are very welcome
lovely combination of the earthly and the supernatural - i hope the bonding occurs soon
Yes but that bonding is not going to happen because the people you love, you gotta let them go sometimes, it's like a dove locked in a cage once set free... Also thanks for reading my poem
that is true, but do remember that if the bond is strong enough they will return even when set free, if they are meant for you
have a beautiful day
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