Eyes blazing with desire
That transcends all peaks
A response from the beloved
It desperately seeks
Like a moth drawn
To the flame
Trembling with desire
Fully aware it will be burnt by the fire
Irresistible attraction
That fatally pulls one close
To be burnt so wholly
From the head to the toes
Drowning deep
And still deeper
In the pools of your eyes
They are the mirrors
That tell no lies
Consumed thoroughly
One can only gape
And surrender thoroughly
For there’s now no escape
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Comments9
Can ya escape at all?! heehee.
absolutely not - lol
The feeling of trap was is so palpable 🙏🏻🕊️
yes - i agree
A poem about the force of passion that overcomes reason. Very nicely written with great metaphors as well. A fave
exactly - that's how it usually happens.. though only the lucky ones get to enjoy a lifetime together
thanks for the feedback
Once hooked your captured, enjoyed the read
yes indeed, and hard to wriggle out
thanks for the feedback
You are very welcome
A powerful poem that shows deep desire and the feeling of being unable to resist love. Well expressed!
yes- it's the irresistibility that i tried to portray - thanks for understanding the underlying message..
have a beautiful weekend
Flee from passion ! And to the banks of the calm river find inspiration !
it is not that easy to escape when love calls - but yes, once you flee, you can find calmness and solace
thanks for stopping by - have a good weekend
Fierce, full of tension but tender - a potent combination
you have nailed it - thanks for the feedback
have a great weekend
Really romantic and full of eager emotion. I really liked this write.
Glad you liked it - and thanks for the beautiful feedback
have a great day
Well done 👍 a beautifully written piece of love 💕
thanks for the inspiring feedback
have a great day
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