three old man on lawn
say good bye , i go to work
joys of retirement
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Author:
Devender Kumar (
Offline) - Published: May 23rd, 2025 09:06
- Category: Haiku
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three old man on lawn
say good bye , i go to work
joys of retirement
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Comments2
A most idealistic senryu loved it. You know no one retires anymore they can't afford it.
What a lovely write, there is no retirement now, we have to work till we drop, nicely crafted write, enjoyed
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