I lay in his arms,
silence filling the room.
"I'll never leave you..."
he said,
breaking the silence around us,
I smile, hearing those words,
it somehow made me feel...
Safe.
His words seemed so...
Genuine...
But they weren't,
they never were,
his mouth, running on pure lies.
...
I sit down in front of a grave,
rain pouring down,
as my tears started to fall onto the wet dirt,
as I hear,
a small whimper escaping my mouth.
"I hate you..."
I say,
my voice all raspy and shaky,
"I hate you so much..."
I say, again,
my voice still shaky as before.
"You lied to me..."
I say,
talking to myself.
...
His words will forever haunt me.
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Author:
Rosie (
Offline) - Published: May 24th, 2025 03:47
- Category: Sad
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Comments4
This poem is well constructed and flows nicely leading to a marvelous end that is left up to the reader to interpret. Nicely done
Thank you so much! This was my first attempt at writing a poem, so I really appreciate your opinion!!
nice write, welcome to site
Thank you so much!!
most welcome
Welcome to MPS 🙏🏻🕊
Thank you!!!
Most welcome Rosie 🕊️🙏🏻
Very nicely written and expressed, leaving the reader to decide who they are talking to, had a sense of anger and pain, nicely done
Thank you so much!! Everyone who's commented so far have all been really sweet!! I really appreciate it!
You are very welcome, it was a very good write
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