I cannot blame thee
I look at the system that cause
I say “here! we fix!”
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Author:
Demar Desu (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: May 25th, 2025 05:19
- Category: Haiku
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- Users favorite of this poem: Damaso
I cannot blame thee
I look at the system that cause
I say “here! we fix!”
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Comments4
Demar the Haiku/ Senryu master. Another good write
“ain’t no masters around here… ain’t no slaves either”
Thank you Soren!
Interesting thinking write, enjoyed the read
What do you think how can I improve?
I am not a master
Hahaha but you are a commenter! That’s good enough for me
Simple yet impactful!
What do you mean?
I said that becuz the poem's message is clear , direct and thought provoking.....
Another fantastic Senryu! You are the god of gust...like a powerful, short wind...you give us truth. Well done, my friend. 🌹👏
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