Social Conditioning

Demar Desu

I cannot blame thee 

I look at the system that cause 

I say “here! we fix!”

  • Author: Demar Desu (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 25th, 2025 05:19
  • Category: Haiku
  • Views: 13
  • Users favorite of this poem: Demar Desu
Get a free collection of Classic Poetry ↓

✔ Receive the ebook in seconds ✔ 50 poems from 50 different authors


Comments +

Comments4

  • sorenbarrett

    Demar the Haiku/ Senryu master. Another good write

    • Demar Desu

      “ain’t no masters around here… ain’t no slaves either”

      Thank you Soren!

    • Poetic Licence

      Interesting thinking write, enjoyed the read

      • Demar Desu

        What do you think how can I improve?

        • Poetic Licence

          I am not a master

          • Demar Desu

            Hahaha but you are a commenter! That’s good enough for me

          • Salvia.S

            Simple yet impactful!

            • Demar Desu

              What do you mean?

              • Salvia.S

                I said that becuz the poem's message is clear , direct and thought provoking.....

              • Tristan Robert Lange

                Another fantastic Senryu! You are the god of gust...like a powerful, short wind...you give us truth. Well done, my friend. 🌹👏



              To be able to comment and rate this poem, you must be registered. Register here or if you are already registered, login here.