partner in marriage

Demar Desu

money we deal with 

hate and love we deal with too 

but we are the deal 

  • Author: Demar Desu (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 26th, 2025 04:31
  • Category: Haiku
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  • sorenbarrett

    Nicely said Demar we deal with ourselves and sell ourselves we condemn prostitution but we all are whores. Excuse the harsh words but I felt it with this poem

    • Demar Desu

      Jeez, no reason to excuse. Interesting way to read it, when I say we are the deal I speak in terms of pricelessness where it’s always a good deal for either of us… life is always a give and take I don’t expect to breathe in all the air without exhaling any lol

      • sorenbarrett

        Funny how the language is ambiguous enough that it can be taken two completely different ways.

        • Demar Desu

          I love art

        • Tristan Robert Lange

          "We are the deal" indeed. It is a give and a take, isn't it? Well done on this, my friend. 🌹👏

          • Demar Desu

            Thank you TRL! Nice to see you active, hope all is well

            • Tristan Robert Lange

              You are most welcome. Yes, me, my back and I are back ...and I am also back from a business conference. 😅 Vacation in a week an a half. Thanks for your warm welcome, my friend. All is well, indeed. ❤️



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