Hello God
How are you doing?
For me, Okay I suppose
I try to do good
I try to treat people fairly
But sometimes that doesn't go well
I seem to keep making mistakes
I hope I don't go to hell
I all I want to do is do good
Spread Kindness and happiness
I just wanted to make friends
But not everybody sees it that way
Heck not many people like me at all
They're maybe waiting for me to fall
God, I hope you haven't given up on me
I don't have many friends
I don't have many close relatives
Deep down, I'm afraid of being alone
Not having any loved ones around me
God, please tell me
Please say I've been a good person
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Author:
DLewis88 (
Offline) - Published: May 26th, 2025 05:28
- Category: Spiritual
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Comments2
This poem gives the feel of an intimacy with God yet an insecurity that what one does is not sufficient. There is a friendliness that extends from God to fellow man but is not always reciprocated and out of human flaw is not met with adequate response. A humble piece that inspires compassion for others that try but don't always come up to expectation. Lovely
Thank you. I deeply appreciate it.
God hears you and sees you and knows your heart
But it’s more than just being a good person.
You’ve got to have faith and believe even when everything is falling apart , you’ve got to repent and ask for forgiveness for the sins that we commit on a daily basis , which we all sin and fall short of the glory of God,
I’m a very strong believer and still sin even though I try not to - I still do - it’s our human ways and humans influences that we continuously fall but as long as our eyes are on our Lord and we ask for forgiveness , truly believe in Him and that Jesus Christ is his son and our redeemer - we will be saved
You are never alone my friend -
Thank you. I'll continue to do my best.
You’re doing great !!
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