Someone who gets you. Who stands by you through and through. To me; that’s what I find beautiful. Someone who is with you on your happiest of days. One who can understand that at times it won’t always be this way. Someone who will join you on hobbies you may find boring. One who won’t mind whether it’s the beach or the mountains. They’ll join you in exploring. Someone who will truly love you for worse or for better. Every storm and trial is best overcome together. Someone who just understands you. To me that is what I find to be beautiful.
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GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀 (
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Very beautiful piece my dear ,
I can relate to ever word
Thank you 🙏 🌹🍀
Absolutely the best thing in the world you can ask for, enjoyed the read
Thank you so much
You are very welcome
Good write GS.
But - aghh - is it beautiful that KP hangs around me for ever? lol.
Yes it is
I must go to Specsavers to make sure! lol. Only if I see her through rose-tinted specs?
Beyond being a most beautiful message well sent this poem reflects your unique poetic ability to place rhyme in what would otherwise be a free form piece. The piece on its own has beauty but the spice of unexpected rhyme as seasoning adds flavor to the dish. You have a most charming way of doing it.
( Someone who
gets you.
Who stands by
you through
and through.0
( Someone who I
s with you
on your happiest of days. One who
can understand that at times it won’t
always be this
way. )
In the use of always and way the near rhyme works almost as a subliminal.
(Someone who will join you on hobbies you may find boring.
One who won’t mind whether it’s the beach or the mountains. They’ll join you in exploring. )
Here the rhyme comes at an unexpected time that throws a bit of surprise in and a sense of relief.
(Someone who will truly love you for worse or for better.
Every storm and trial is best overcome together.)
A lovely poem for all of this. Much more complex than it appears at first glance
Thank you for your constant feedback. Thank you for reading
Being understood. Wow. That would be absolutely beautiful. Well done on this, my friend. Well done! Absolutely beautiful! 🌹👏
Thank you Tristian
You are most welcome, my friend!
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