Tuesday to Thursday
My blues are now gone, because Jane left today
and now I am free to choose my own way.
Free at last, I can spend my Friday nights
drinking and getting into barroom fights.
Saturday, I’ll be able to sleep ‘til one.
Then, try like hell to get a date with someone.
Take Rose to the bar where we will have some fun.
We’ll dance until we’re done, and then make our run.
Sunday’s a mess I have to pass on church.
I’ve been arrested by the cops and strip searched.
Then, I heard the judge say to me, ‘Pay the man!.”
but regretfully told him, “ I will if I can.”
Monday, I sadly spend the whole day in jail
Pay the tab and the fine. My car’s now for sale
Then, woefully I tell Rose,” I’m not a bad guy.”
but, she slaps me and says, “You're a fool…. Goodbye.”
From Tuesday to Thursday, I cry.
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Author:
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- Published: May 26th, 2025 18:23
- Comment from author about the poem: A bit oh humor mixed with a love scene?
- Category: Love
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Comments6
Now that's funny in all its sadness. Loved the wording in this poem it made all the difference and left me smiling. Great job a fave
Thank you, SB. Always good to hear from you.
Quite an encapsulation of a week, Phil๐๏ธ๐๐ป
Rik
Thanks, Arqios. I encapsulate to keep from sinking.
Thatโs wise and practical, as well as enjoyable ๐๐ป๐๏ธ
I am sure you will enjoy your week next week then Phil.
Andy
Thanks, Andy. But I'm too weak to enjoy anything.
Although in essence it is a write of someone cocking up their life, it is written in an entertaining and humourous way, enjoyed the read
Thanks, PL. A bit more nonsense than essence.
You are very welcome
There's a kind of inevitable logic there that tickled me and dragged me along.
I have sighted (and kept my distance) a couple of nutters like that over the years....
Good 'un, Phil.
Thanks, DD. Those nutters are everywhere.
Powerful and poignant.
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