If maybe, if maybe
garden beds were sheltered
If only, if only
The wood didn’t rot
If somehow, if somehow
The seeds gently sprouted
Have mercy, please mercy
The roots couldn’t take
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Author:
Hem (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: I think I’m actually losing my mind but it’s chill. I can’t tell if my metaphors are too obvious. I can’t tell if they’re eye roll inducing or tolerable. Can’t be confident in my voice or style yet. I’m tired.
- Category: Sad
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Comments2
A metaphor indeed and from its seed I have to ask if there was root rot. Nicely done
The seed took route long enough to make the mind think, enjoyed the read
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