Notice of absence from Tristan Robert Lange
Friends, I’m doing my best to keep up with comments. 😅 I’m still current on my own poems and first replies on others’ work, but this season has been a bit of a twister. Figured I’d drop a quick note so you don’t think I’ve vanished or gone flaky.
Read. Write. Rise. Realize. 🤘💀🖤
Friends, I’m doing my best to keep up with comments. 😅 I’m still current on my own poems and first replies on others’ work, but this season has been a bit of a twister. Figured I’d drop a quick note so you don’t think I’ve vanished or gone flaky.
Read. Write. Rise. Realize. 🤘💀🖤
The Golden Teacher
And Hillbilly
Walk through
A field of flower—
The transcendental trinity—
Power meets pow.
Wow!
Fuckin’ wow!
And how!
Wise gal and wild guy
Just going at it.
Kaleidoscope coitus—
The cunning lingers,
Cutting through the serpent,
Its magic is medicine
In felatio.
Swallow the snake
For heaven’s sake.
The mindgasm slithers,
Synaptic semen shockwave.
Conception. Gestation.
Fucking born!
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Erm, some ones seem to be having fun! Are they related to Obi and Popeye? (don't answer that! lol.)
Yeah. Best I don't, mate! 🤣 Let's just assume they were having fields full of fun! 🌀🖤🐍🕯️
Excellent write Tristan
Thank you, Tony! 🌀🖤🐍🕯️
You're welcome
Screwed on hallucinogens what a trip. Enjoyed you word play very cunning for a linguist. As for the snake I was suspicious of why snuck unto the garden. What a trip!
😏 Glad you enjoyed the trip, my friend! Your comment so made my day! Much appreciated, Soren! 🌀🖤🐍🕯️
This sounds like one hell of a disturbing trip, not that I have been there, of course, loved the word play, wow bring me down
Thank you, so much, my friend. A trip indeed. Glad that you appreciated the word play and that the poem delivered! 🌀🖤🐍🕯️
You are very welcome
If It were always as complicated as that, It might save many unnecessary births!!
Rich imagery which brings perspiration to me brow.
You've got that right, my friend! This, right here, might be the solution to the world's overpopulation problem! 🤣 All jokes aside, always appreciate your time and feedback, Dave! 🌀🖤🐍🕯️
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