Notice of absence from Caring dove
Sometimes you feel avoided
almost as if
someone thinks
youl be a bit negative
like that grey cloud over there
a little sad
speaking tones of how they feel
sometimes you wander
am I not as positive or bright as the sun
am I avoided
because sometimes I’m a little
like a sighing cloud
am I being avoided
because they think il sigh
or speak in negative tones ,/sometimes
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Author:
Yellow rose (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Do you ever feel this way Like your partly being avoided Because the other person may be thinking youl be a little negative or not positive enough Sometimes I feel like that .. Some people want completely positive people in their life But that’s not how things work You can’t be positive all the time And if you say few negative things doesn’t mean you need to be avoided
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Comments1
Recognition of human flaws in this poem. We live in a world that has little tolerance for pain, suffering, hard work, patience and this extends to our conversations that would rather ignore reality than face it. Nicely written
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