Day by day
Our love just walked away
We tried
And
We tried
Nothing seemed to work
Day by day
We gave it our all
Put every last ounce we had
To try and make things right
Day by day
We realized we were starting to see the end
No matter how hard we tried
No matter how much we loved each other
Day by day
We drifted further and further apart
Until there was nothing left
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Author:
Tony36 (
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Comments5
Heartfelt & poignant!
Thank you
Sad with a sense of longing lost and hope as well. Drifting out of sight on life's sea. A hard poem to read, maybe because it hits too close to home
Thank you
Very relatable write, seeing the painful end coming, nicely expressed and written
Thank you
You are very welcome
Wonderful, Tony! 🌹👏
Thank you
You’re welcome!
A powerful, hard-hitting piece.
Thamk you
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