With the tide
A wave rushes in,
Rises up
And falls back.
Ceaseless ebb and flow.
Shhhhh– sings the sea.
Soft
Soothing
Submerging sand.
Tsssss – sighs the shingle.
Grittily rasping,
Returning to the ocean.
Incessant motion
Constant rhythm
Waves rise and rushhh to claim the shore.
Shhhhh –
Tssssss –
Hypnotic
Eternal
Melodious
Soothing sound.
Jan bach
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Jan bach (
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Comments2
Great use of onomatope and alliteration to create a mood that accompanies the words of the poem. Peaceful and lovely
Has a calming and peaceful feel as you read it out, enjoyed the read
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