Beasts

Damaso

I looked at the mirror so much that I stopped recognizing myself.

The reflection of the reflection
locked in my eyes,
infinite sets.

Panic threatens
by the thousandths of a second.

If I lose control,
I might crawl away.

I suspect
the watchful step
of a spy
of myself.

I usually tame a golden beast;
its dark destiny rings out in unison.

  • Author: Damaso (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 29th, 2025 09:39
  • Comment from author about the poem: Every now and then they cross between the seams of the cosmos.
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 57
  • Users favorite of this poem: Poetic Licence, Tristan Robert Lange, Meera Mere
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  • sorenbarrett

    The metaphor in this poem conveys the message well. Nicely said

    • Damaso

      Thank you so much for stopping by to read and share your words of encouragement. That response is so comforting. Best regards.

    • Poetic Licence

      Very relatable to me, sometimes I want to crawl away but can't, nicely expressed and written

      • Damaso

        I'm so glad it resonated enough to deserve those words. Thanks for stopping by. Best regards.

        • Poetic Licence

          You are very welcome

        • Tony36

          Great write

          • Damaso

            Friend, thanks for stopping by. As always, a pleasure. Best regards.

            • Tony36

              you're welcome best regards

            • Tristan Robert Lange

              One cannot escape that which lives within. The only way out is deeper in. Something i have been reflecting on lately. Wonderful poem that speaks deeply to me, my friend! Well done. A fave! 👏🌹

              • Damaso

                Wow, I'm glad it resonated enough to receive these words. Thanks for the encouragement! I think you're right, and it may be the only way forward. Best regards.

                • Tristan Robert Lange

                  Indeed! It may be! You are most welcome! Thank you.

                • nephilim56

                  enjoyed the write, we have been there I think

                  • Damaso

                    Wow, I'm glad you liked it. We can see magical places in the cosmos, only if you can endure the pressure of existing. Best regards.

                    • nephilim56

                      you are welcome

                    • Dan Williams

                      The mysterious Golden Beast. Clever, thought provoking. Well Done.

                      • Damaso

                        Well, I'm very glad you enjoyed reading it and that you raised at least a few questions. Best regards, and thank you very much.

                      • RSM0812

                        To me this conveys the thoughts of a self admirer. It's good to love oneself but too much of a good thing is still narcissistic right

                        • Damaso

                          Of course, I understand your point of view. Perhaps self-admiration made me realize, in its emptiness, that the reflection the mirror shows me isn't the totality of my being, but rather there's a counterpart flowing in the same way, somehow from the invisible. Thank you so much for stopping by to read and share your thoughts. Best regards.

                        • NafisaSB

                          Understand the feeling- it comes on us unawares

                          • Damaso

                            That is what the vertigo generates, nobody seems to realize! Thanks for reading and leaving your impression of the text. Greetings!

                            • NafisaSB

                              oh ok. my husband has dizziness - not sure it caused by vertigo - will check it out with him

                              • Damaso

                                Great, I think it's a good experiment. Thank you so much for stopping by to share your ideas. Best regards.

                                • NafisaSB

                                  thanks once again - have a great weekend



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