I looked at the mirror so much that I stopped recognizing myself.
The reflection of the reflection
locked in my eyes,
infinite sets.
Panic threatens
by the thousandths of a second.
If I lose control,
I might crawl away.
I suspect
the watchful step
of a spy
of myself.
I usually tame a golden beast;
its dark destiny rings out in unison.
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Pari4 (Pseudonym) (
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The metaphor in this poem conveys the message well. Nicely said
Thank you so much for stopping by to read and share your words of encouragement. That response is so comforting. Best regards.
Very relatable to me, sometimes I want to crawl away but can't, nicely expressed and written
I'm so glad it resonated enough to deserve those words. Thanks for stopping by. Best regards.
You are very welcome
Great write
Friend, thanks for stopping by. As always, a pleasure. Best regards.
you're welcome best regards
One cannot escape that which lives within. The only way out is deeper in. Something i have been reflecting on lately. Wonderful poem that speaks deeply to me, my friend! Well done. A fave! 👏🌹
Wow, I'm glad it resonated enough to receive these words. Thanks for the encouragement! I think you're right, and it may be the only way forward. Best regards.
Indeed! It may be! You are most welcome! Thank you.
enjoyed the write, we have been there I think
Wow, I'm glad you liked it. We can see magical places in the cosmos, only if you can endure the pressure of existing. Best regards.
you are welcome
The mysterious Golden Beast. Clever, thought provoking. Well Done.
Well, I'm very glad you enjoyed reading it and that you raised at least a few questions. Best regards, and thank you very much.
To me this conveys the thoughts of a self admirer. It's good to love oneself but too much of a good thing is still narcissistic right
Of course, I understand your point of view. Perhaps self-admiration made me realize, in its emptiness, that the reflection the mirror shows me isn't the totality of my being, but rather there's a counterpart flowing in the same way, somehow from the invisible. Thank you so much for stopping by to read and share your thoughts. Best regards.
Understand the feeling- it comes on us unawares
That is what the vertigo generates, nobody seems to realize! Thanks for reading and leaving your impression of the text. Greetings!
oh ok. my husband has dizziness - not sure it caused by vertigo - will check it out with him
Great, I think it's a good experiment. Thank you so much for stopping by to share your ideas. Best regards.
thanks once again - have a great weekend
Brilliant first line! Nice poem
I am very happy that I see it that way, thank you very much for reading and leaving your words of breath. Kind regards
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