Waters from above
trickling drops of life
symbols of the love
the mother cares for her children
do you care for her
the deer the frolic through
the forest
the birds that sometimes sing
do they listen to the waters
do they feel her pain
if you listen closely
you might hear her speak
does she call you Friend
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Author:
James Warren (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: May 29th, 2025 13:31
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Comments3
Nature and her language that we do not listen to and possibly a metaphor in that we seldom listen to others as well. Nicely done
A sense of our we listening to natures call for help, or are we ignoring it as we tend to do with ourselves, nicely expressed and written
The waters of the river are my friends, indeed... I like what you have done here. Nicely done!
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