A starship in our atmosphere

evenwheniLie



 

 

 

 

………..Is this an alien craft with female proportions, jewelry, metallic pieces of clothing added to the distortion,  it’s seductive shields felt like a sexual extortion, the black dots in its eyes could be but silhouettes of creatures on the bridge of this magnificent ship, curves that appear to be hips, beautiful cheekbones and lips, belly button where an umbilical cord was once snipped, or could it be a trick executed by shadows and lights, or the liquor I had tonight, it’s an abduction; is that smoke or clouds, a giant lake or floor tiles, my perspective’s wild, skyscrapers or the legs of tables, is this real or is it fable, it hovers to the center of the dance floor like it’s its debut.

  • Author: EvenwheniLie (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 30th, 2025 00:29
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Mutley Ravishes

    I can't think of anything to say except "that was......" Nope, I give up. I can't find the right word! Great write.

  • Poetic Licence

    A very well crafted write, enjoyed the read

    • evenwheniLie

      Thanks, inspired by an old song…. “You are my starship.”

      • Poetic Licence

        You are very welcome

      • sorenbarrett

        Quite the depiction of a trip to the club in the sky. Well painted this starship dancer. Lovely

        • evenwheniLie

          Thanks, glad you enjoyed it..

        • Doggerel Dave

          Phew! Objectification beyond......Fantasy plus..... It's fantasy 'cos getting her out of that suit would require more than I have in my toolbox.......



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