God Please, Save Me From Myself

Shaunmatthewcpoetry

None of us are perfect, we all need help,

God please, save me from myself.

Each day is a test, serpent in the tree,

He knows my aura, the facets of me.

Free will is given to us in abundance,

Feel it flowing in the underwater currents.

They hold animosity for our saviour Christ,

I can explain my beliefs and views over a few pints.

Deep down, you know something don't feel right,

Enjoy yourself to an extent, get home safe tonight.

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  • orchidee

    Now look, lol. You knows only you and I are perfect humans! heehee.

    • Shaunmatthewcpoetry

      Haha I wish!

      • orchidee

        My comment may be a bit along the lines of a supposedly true story - a priest said 'I'm a man of peace, and if someone doesn't agree with me, I will punch them on the nose' Doh!

        • orchidee

          My comment may be a bit along the lines of a supposedly true story - a priest said 'I'm a man of peace, and if someone doesn't agree with me, I will punch them on the nose' Doh!

          • Shaunmatthewcpoetry

            Haha nice!

            • orchidee

              I posted that twice, I said, I posted that twice! lol.

            • Mutley Ravishes

              How many times have I said that to myself recently? Great flow, Shaun.

            • sorenbarrett

              Before reading the poem I saw the Good is God sign and it made me remember years ago traveling through Oklahoma I saw a sign on the side of the road that said Good God Church with an arrow pointing ahead. For the longest time I looked not just for it but for a sign for the Bad God church. There must be a balance in all things. Loved the poem and its message to loosen up a bit and enjoy life, it is short

              • Shaunmatthewcpoetry

                Cheers, thank you, yeah I've had a weird journey, I didn't believe until 2020, I don't go to church though.

              • Tristan Robert Lange

                Brilliantly written and true! Amen! πŸ‘πŸŒΉ

              • GenXer Shamrocker ☘️

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              • Keeter C

                I too am my own worst enemy. Nice!

              • NafisaSB

                We all need help from above as sometimes it’s hard to resist the serpent
                the write gives one food for thought πŸ€”



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