Up and down
You control
The heartbreaker
The lover
O the pain
O the passion
O friend
I laugh
I cry
You're the rain
You're the sunshine
Parts of me wants to leave
Parts of me can't live without
You're my everything
The beautiful
The ugly
Up and down
You control
The heartbreaker
The lover
O the pain
O the passion
O friend
I laugh
I cry
You're the rain
You're the sunshine
Parts of me wants to leave
Parts of me can't live without
You're my everything
The beautiful
The ugly
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The duality of a relationship is shown in this poem. Usually poems speak to one side or the other and ignore the other . This poem represents the reality not the fantasy of relationships and reality is not what poetry usually is. A great and original type of poetry. Very nice
A nicely written write covering both sides of a relationship, and the reality of it, enjoyed the read
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