It is silently
Invisibly
The Trinity will come
In our minds
In our hearts
In our souls
Tests will come
Individual lives
Individual paths
Paths leading us forward
Only two directions to take
Right or wrong
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Author:
James Michael (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: June 1st, 2025 19:53
- Comment from author about the poem: Inspired by the book “The Imitation of Christ”.
- Category: Spiritual
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Comments3
Wonderful the poem speaks of trinity and then the next three lines all begin the same. Symbolism even though subtle. Very nice
Dear soren, answer me this. What is the meaning of life?
Don't have answers to questions that big, I can only answer for me.
Oddly, I’ve received similar responses from A.I.
I'm not smart enough to be AI and not a good enough poet to be it either. Am I under suspicion?
Pay me no mind, I’ve seen “The Matrix” too many times. That could be a line in a new poem!
Good write JM.
Thanks!
At the end of the day that is what comes down to, making the wrong or right choice, enjoyed the read
I believe most people can know in their hearts the difference between right and wrong. A bit of gray area from time to time.
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