3 x notes on thought

Maplespal

Thinking


Thinking is the thing that entertains me,
it also brings the fears sight so I can see,
allows the pain, sadness, depression to live,
it allows the thoughts and the ideas it gives.

Thinking of the sights my eyes let me see,
defines the curves and lines and then tells me,
explains the objects seen from any of my views,
my eyes are perfect at the jobs designed to do.

Thinking takes a sound and breaks it down for me,
lets the musical scores be created to see,
translates the sounds captured by the ears,
in dreams reuses all the sounds they hear.

Thinking is a life ability that's given free,
given to all creatures so they all can see,
an ability that sets us and divides us apart,
and the thoughts being molded from the start.

 

 

 

 

Revelations note


Sweet revelations and the surrendering ahead,
taking a minute for the visions created in my head.
Directing movement and the things I would have said,
the thoughts buried and pools of the ideas I've bled.

Restless, congestive, artistical, and difficultly read,
painting pictures from the colors I've pulled from red.
The revelations sweeter then the surrendering ahead,
twisting of ideas into fantastical notions in my head.

Sweet tasting the thought of revelations coming ahead,
more pools of ideas twisted and notionally bled,
surrendering when its time for my thoughts to be dead.

I wrote this note for me to peruse and often I've read,
taking my minutes for the visions created in my head.
Taming, organizing the pools of notional ideas bled,
and reviewing the words I would have and have said.

 

 

 

 

 

One of the kind


Distorted I've been told is something amiss,
watching two dreams blend and change as they kiss.
Feeling the loss I created by missing my you,
watching those dreams kiss changing the view.

I pick at my scabs and bleed in my dreams,
laugh at my inner self when pain makes him scream.
I push and kick, then call myself awful names,
just to have fun when to myself I play games.

This mind I've been told I've been given, I've got,
above the neck, behind the face, the minds spot.
This mind is the same as yours but is one of the kind,
that thinks every thoughts every vision it finds.

 

 

 

  • Author: Maplespal (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: June 2nd, 2025 05:05
  • Comment from author about the poem: had a thought provoking day yesterday. Sorry for 3 at once.
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  • sorenbarrett

    There is a sadness and a sense of loss that tie these together as well as a sense of resentment. They go well together and seem to be a natural trio.



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