take it all

gray0328

 

the gun shaking in his  

hands like he doesn’t  

want to do this but  

life pushed him too far  

 

i empty the register though  

the bills feel heavier than  

they used to—i offer the  

grill just lit for dinner  

 

his eyes soften but not  

enough to put the weapon  

down—i say take the car  

leave it wherever you need  

 

this is just stuff—what’s yours  

is peace and anything to  

get you there—he runs before  

i can ask if he’s eaten

  • Author: gray0328 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: June 2nd, 2025 15:23
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Doggerel Dave

    Serious advice embodied in this piece - complete reality. Clear head and 'hero' doesn't exist within this frame. Subtle touch of irony to finish.



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