I wish a morning, where I will not wake up
I wish a night, where I will fallen asleep forever
Will it be the same
I wish to somewhere where i could not return.
words woven in my mind keep repeating and haunting me
I wish a day where those words don't repeat in my mind
i wish someone would pickup my soul from these pages and think that i should have loved her
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Author:
saswati das (
Offline) - Published: June 4th, 2025 07:42
- Category: Reflection
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Wishes are plentiful and the harvest is full of ripe fruit a shame that only so many will fit in one's pockets. A lovely write
Well thankyou for stopping by and wishes desires is what make a human greedy
btw I also like your writing
A reflection of wishing on what they should of done, now left with wishes they do not want, nicely expressed and written
Thankyou for stopping by but somewhere we leave our wounds yo show them what they have done and to hurt us more but in the need they hurts us more
btw loved your write
You are very welcome, and thank you feel free to comment on it, always good to get people's opinions, enjoy the rest of your day
Love it
thankyou for stopping by
You're welcome
Through many of your poems I notice sadness and despondency, because things are not working the way you expect. It happens to us. You have to struggle through these times and phases. Stay positive. Thinking about failures only keeps you down.
thank you i will try to stay positive
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