You are the sunrise, the sun’s own smile,
A blaze of gold—like Cassia petals piled.
Your gaze pours the wine of life anew,
As my heart’s flute sings, pure and true.
Carve my name in your soul’s bright core,
Our silent glances ignite evermore.
Like constellations sparked divine,
Through fate’s own lightning—yours and mine.
You’ll never fade, though worlds take flight,
Mirrored in time, my endless light.
My pulse drums your celestial tune,
For you are the sun—my moon, my noon.
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Mottakeenur Rehman (
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- Comment from author about the poem: love into the entire universe... (sun for day, moon for night, noon for peak joy).
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That’s beautiful )) lovely words !🙂
Thanks !😊🙏🙏
Spreading love around the universe, lovely read
This poem encompasses the known universe ( the universe we can see with out own eyes). Just as love encompasses the known person we love. A nice use of metaphor to demonstrate the extent of the love. Well done
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