Your Heart Is Strong.

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Your Heart is Strong.

 

Your Heart Is

Strong.

 

It Is Your

Mind

That Is Weak.

 

Tobani 2025.

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  • sorenbarrett

    I think you're right I've been called feeble minded all my life lol A most motivational write Tobani a call to action and a placing of blame on something we have control over. Very nice in its brevity

  • David Wakeling

    This is so true. If we look to our emotions we often get a better answer.The mind is often very selfish.A thoughtful piece. Well done

  • Mottakeenur Rehman

    Mind power is the supreme power ...Mind is the software of the brain...Good in brevity!

  • Tristan Robert Lange

    Truth! That which we refer to as "the heart" is really in our head! 🤣 Wonderful job on this. Profound, my friend! Hope your weekend rocks! 🌹👏

  • MendedFences27

    So true, I admit it. - Phil A.

  • Goldfinch60

    True words Tobani.

    Andy

  • Cheeky Missy

    Hahaha. And "...the heart is deceitful above all things and desperately wicked, who can know it?" (Jeremiah 17:9) And the mind, isn't it inexplicably married to the heart? Dunno. I give up. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting, fascinating poignancy. Thank you for sharing.

  • NafisaSB

    Thought provoking message. Always a tussle between the mind and the heart - agree it is the mind which is fickle and keeps changing - the heart definitely knows what is to be done, but is overruled by the 'ifs' and 'whats'

    • Poetic Licence

      Thank you for your feedback, verry much appreciated

      • NafisaSB

        you are most welcome
        take care

        • Poetic Licence

          You too

        • GenXer Shamrocker ☘️

          Don’t stay away too long.



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