I am the rain that never ceases.
I am the Monsoon that will drown you.
There is evil in your diseases,
That I have placed there to hurt you.
I will never speak or let you see me,
I will just burn you with too much Sun,
I will kill your loved ones in misery.
Don’t run you cannot hide until I’m done.
The Black night is my domain, be careful,
There is wickedness in your way.
Look not to the moon to be cheerful,
I will not answer you when you pray.
Cut yourself and I will be there,
I will take your life when it pleases.
Of all the troubles in the air,
I am the rain that never ceases.
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David Wakeling (
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As I read this David the word blame came to mind. It seems to fit. A powerful read that speaks with authority as if it were death.
An interesting interpretation. Taking the "blame" and feelings of guilt for actions in life can be a source of great pain and anguish. Death is always waiting around the corner. Thanks so much for your insight compadre.I must confess that I wasn't sure I should post this poem.But there it is
Taking the risk of doubt is often the most revealing part of us.
A sense of beating yourself to death through guilt, reminded me of when i was married, enjoyed the read
Yes marriage can be a nightmare.Thanks for your comments compadre
You are very welcome
Quite a good write about the darkness that dwells everywhere. To me this poem pulls the strings.
Thank you so much
Excellent write David
Thank you
You're welcome
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