You left
Your coat
Upon the hook
When you left
Without
A look.
So brave
And fearless
To turn away
From all
You had known
In another day.
Friends ask still
Where you are
Another planet
Another star
A brand new life
A brand new home
Do you ever think
Your mind to roam ?
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Author:
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) (
Offline) - Published: June 7th, 2025 02:20
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Comments3
A sad poem of loss and all the questions that go with it. Very nicely written
very kind, appreciated and thanks
Our old coat eaten up by seasons is our conscience !
thanking you, appreciated
I love how you use minimalism to convey such depth of meaning. It’s very effective and potent in your technique. Elizabeth
very kind, much appreciated, thanking you
My pleasure
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