A LONE COAT ON A HOOK

nephilim56

You left
Your coat
Upon the hook
When you left
Without
A look.

So brave
And fearless
To turn away
From all
You had known
In another day.

Friends ask still
Where you are
Another planet 
Another star 
A brand new life
A brand new home
Do you ever think
Your mind to roam ?

  • Author: nephilim56 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: June 7th, 2025 02:20
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • sorenbarrett

    A sad poem of loss and all the questions that go with it. Very nicely written

    • nephilim56

      very kind, appreciated and thanks

    • Lorenz

      Our old coat eaten up by seasons is our conscience !

      • nephilim56

        thanking you, appreciated

      • ElizabethMoroz

        I love how you use minimalism to convey such depth of meaning. It’s very effective and potent in your technique. Elizabeth

        • nephilim56

          very kind, much appreciated, thanking you

          • ElizabethMoroz

            My pleasure



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