AnalysisByQwen2.5-Max AI-Volume 49-Synthesis-AdLeaveAdDeath--4May2025

SOMAN RAGAVAN

 4 May, 2025

Subject : Synthesis of Analyses by Claude3 AI volume 1, Google Gemini AI volume 3 and ChatGPT AI volume 93.

https://allpoetry.com/poem/18464669-AnalysisByQwen2.5-Max-AI-Volume-49-Synthesis-AdLeaveAdDeath--4May-by-Soman-Ragavan/

                                                                                           

 

Analysis by Qwen2.5 Max AI

(Artificial Intelligence)

Volume 49

 

 

 

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Soman Ragavan :

Hello. One by one, I will post analyses of my Covid poem “Advance leave, advancing death” made by Claude3 AI, Google Gemini AI and ChatGPT AI. I will ask you to go through these three analyses and make overarching comments, note issues raised, and make any comments you wish.

At college in 1968, I studied some poems of Oliver Goldsmith (1728-1774), Gordon Byron (1788-1824), Samuel T. Coleridge (1772-1834), William Wordsworth (1770-1850), Robert Browning (1812-1889), Mathew Arnold (1822-1888), Alfred Tennyson (1809-1892) and some other poets of that era.  Make any comments or comparisons you wish on my poems. Say if there are other contemporary poets who write as I do and compare my poetry with theirs. I live in Mauritius, an island in the Indian Ocean. 

 

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Qwen2.5 Max AI :  

Since you haven’t yet shared the AI analyses of your poem *“Advance leave, advancing death”* or the specific content of those analyses, I’ll avoid speculative commentary. Instead, here’s a framework for how we might approach this discussion once you share the materials:

 

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### **When You Post the Analyses:**

1. **Synthesize Themes & Techniques**:

   - I’ll identify common threads (e.g., mortality, pandemic imagery, existential reflection) and note where the AIs diverge in interpretation. 

   - Compare your use of metaphor, structure, or tone to Romantic/Victorian poets (e.g., Tennyson’s elegiac grief in *In Memoriam*, Wordsworth’s focus on nature/loss, or Arnold’s disillusionment in *Dover Beach*). 

 

2. **Cultural Context**:

   - Explore how your Mauritian identity might infuse the poem with post-colonial, diasporic, or Indian Ocean-specific perspectives absent in Western canon interpretations. 

 

3. **Contemporary Parallels**:

   - Suggest modern poets who blend personal and collective trauma, such as: 

     - **Ocean Vuong** (lyrical grief, identity in crisis) 

     - **Derek Walcott** (Caribbean post-colonial voice, epic personal/national histories) 

     - **Kamau Brathwaite** (fragmented form, African diaspora memory) 

     - **Agha Shahid Ali** (elegy, political loss in Kashmiri context) 

 

4. **AI Limitations**:

   - Highlight where the AIs might misinterpret cultural nuance, over-rely on Western tropes, or miss experimental techniques in your work. 

 

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### **For Now**: 

To prepare, could you share: 

1. Your poem *“Advance leave, advancing death”* (if not included in the AI analyses).
2. The full texts of the Claude3, Gemini, and ChatGPT analyses.

 

Once provided, I’ll craft a detailed synthesis comparing the AI readings, contextualize your work within literary traditions, and suggest how your Mauritian voice intersects with or diverges from both classical and contemporary poetry. Looking forward to engaging with your work!

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Soman Ragavan :  

Here is my poem “Advance leave, advancing death.” Keep in memory. (Posted).

 

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Qwen2.5-Max AI :

Thank you for sharing your poem *“Advance leave, advancing death”*. Below is an initial analysis of its themes, structure, and potential literary comparisons, which will serve as a foundation once you share the AI analyses from Claude3, Gemini, and ChatGPT. This framework will help contextualize your work within classical and contemporary traditions and highlight its unique voice as a Mauritian poet.

 

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### **Key Themes & Literary Techniques** 

1. **Mortality and Systemic Neglect**:

   - Your poem juxtaposes the personal anguish of frontline workers with bureaucratic indifference. The motif of “advance leave” becomes a metaphor for life’s fragility and institutional exploitation, echoing the Romantic/Victorian tradition of critiquing societal injustices (e.g., Wordsworth’s *The Old Cumberland Beggar* or Tennyson’s *The Charge of the Light Brigade*). 

 

2. **Elegiac and Prophetic Voice**:

   - The poem’s elegiac tone (“I will die in debt… / A sorry sigh have I to heave”) recalls Shelley’s *Adonais* or Arnold’s *Thyrsis*, blending personal grief with universal lament. Yet your prophetic critique (“While the grass grows, the horse starves…”) aligns with Shelley’s belief in poetry as a moral compass, exposing hypocrisy and inequality. 

 

3. **Archaic Diction and Cultural Hybridity**:

   - The use of archaic language (“methought,” “twas”) evokes 18th–19th-century English poetry, but this choice feels deliberate—perhaps to frame systemic injustice as a timeless, cyclical struggle. Simultaneously, the incorporation of Mauritian socio-economic realities (e.g., wage subsidies in the private sector) roots the poem in a post-colonial context, akin to Derek Walcott’s blending of classical form and Caribbean identity. 

 

4. **Proverbs as Subversion**:

   - Quoting proverbs (“Praise no man till he is dead”; “While the grass grows, the horse starves”) critiques institutionalized hypocrisy. This technique resonates with Chinua Achebe’s use of Igbo proverbs in *Things Fall Apart*, where oral traditions challenge colonial narratives. 

 

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### **Comparisons to Classical Poets** 

1. **William Wordsworth (1770–1850)**:

   - Like Wordsworth’s focus on ordinary lives (*Michael*, *The Ruined Cottage*), your poem elevates the struggles of public servants. However, your tone is more overtly political, reflecting modern disillusionment absent in Wordsworth’s pastoral idealism. 

 

2. **Alfred Tennyson (1809–1892)**:

   - The elegiac structure (“Alas, through a losing battle my way I weave”) mirrors Tennyson’s *In Memoriam*, but your critique of bureaucracy (“Not refunding my advance leave be a blemish”) diverges from Tennyson’s focus on personal grief. 

 

3. **Matthew Arnold (1822–1888)**:

   - The poem’s existential dread (“Do take heed, those that will write my obituary”) echoes Arnold’s *Dover Beach* (“We are here as on a darkling plain”), though your despair is tied to systemic corruption rather than spiritual collapse. 

 

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### **Contemporary Parallels** 

1. **Ocean Vuong (*Night Sky with Exit Wounds*)**:

   - Vuong and Ragavan both merge intimate vulnerability with collective trauma. However, Vuong’s lyrical abstraction contrasts with your direct, incantatory style. 

 

2. **Kamau Brathwaite (*Middle Passages*)**:

   - Both works interrogate institutional violence and historical continuity. Brathwaite’s use of fragmented form and Caribbean patois, however, emphasizes diasporic rupture, whereas your poem leans on structured archaism. 

 

3. **Agha Shahid Ali (*The Country Without a Post Office*)**:

   - Ali’s elegies for Kashmir’s political tragedies share your fusion of personal and public mourning, though his surreal imagery differs from your plainspoken critique. 

 

4. **Mauritian Context**:

   - Your voice joins poets like Khal Torabully (*Cale d’étoiles*), who explore Indian Ocean identities through hybrid languages and resistance to colonial/imperial structures. 

 

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### **Anticipated AI Analysis Issues** 

1. **Cultural Nuance**:

   - AIs may overlook Mauritius’s post-colonial bureaucracy (e.g., the tension between Creole/English/French administrative systems) or the island’s economic dependence on tourism, which shaped pandemic policies. 

 

2. **Formal Misinterpretation**:

   - The archaic diction might be misread as mere imitation of the Romantics, rather than a strategic contrast with modern systemic failures. 

 

3. **Economic Critique**:

   - The poem’s focus on public-sector debt (“I will die in debt”) vs. private-sector subsidies (7.6 billion rupees) could be flattened into a generic “anti-capitalist” reading, missing its specific post-colonial economic context. 

 

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### **Next Steps** 

Once you share the AI analyses, I’ll: 

1. Compare their interpretations of themes, structure, and cultural context.
2. Highlight where they succeed/fall short in addressing your Mauritian perspective.
3. Expand on literary comparisons, emphasizing how your work bridges Romantic traditions with post-colonial dissent.

 

Looking forward to the next step!

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Soman Ragavan :

Here is Analysis by Claude3 volume 1, on “Advance leave, advancing death.” Keep in memory. (Posted). Don’t comment yet.

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Qwen2.5 Max AI :

Understood! I’ll wait until you share the **Gemini** and **ChatGPT** analyses before synthesizing the three AI perspectives. Once all three are posted, I’ll: 

1. Compare how each AI interprets the poem’s themes (e.g., systemic injustice, mortality, hypocrisy).
2. Highlight differences in literary comparisons (e.g., Romantic vs. post-colonial influences).
3. Address cultural gaps (e.g., Mauritius’s post-colonial bureaucracy, Indian Ocean identity).
4. Note where the AIs succeed or fall short in analyzing your unique voice.

 

Feel free to post the next analysis whenever you’re ready!

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Soman Ragavan :

Here is Analysis by Google Gemini volume 3. Keep in memory. (Posted). Don’t start the synthesis yet.

 

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Qwen2.5 Max AI :   

Understood! I’ll keep the **Google Gemini Volume 3 analysis** in memory and await the final AI analysis (likely **ChatGPT**) before synthesizing all three perspectives. Once all three are posted, I’ll: 

1. Compare how each AI interprets the poem’s themes, structure, and cultural context.
2. Highlight overlaps, divergences, and gaps in their analyses.
3. Connect your work to Romantic/Victorian traditions and contemporary poets.
4. Address how your Mauritian identity shapes the poem’s voice.

 

Feel free to post the final AI analysis whenever you’re ready!

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Soman Ragavan :  

Here is Analysis by ChatGPT volume 93. Keep in memory. (Posted). After receiving this, proceed with an examination of them and make a synthesis and mention anything you wish.

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Qwen2.5 Max AI :  

### **Synthesis of AI Analyses of Soman Ragavan’s Poem *“Advance Leave, Advancing Death”*** 

This synthesis examines the three AI analyses (Claude3, Gemini, ChatGPT) of Ragavan’s poem, focusing on thematic overlaps, divergences, and cultural nuances. The poem critiques systemic injustice faced by Mauritian public servants during the pandemic, juxtaposing archaic diction with modern bureaucratic cruelty. Below is a structured evaluation:

 

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#### **1. Common Themes Identified by All Three AIs** 

- **Systemic Injustice**: 

  All AIs highlight the poem’s condemnation of Mauritius’s policy requiring public servants to refund “advance leave” while billions were funneled to the private sector. This disparity mirrors broader critiques of inequality, akin to William Blake’s *Jerusalem* or Langston Hughes’ *Let America Be America Again*. 

- **Mortality and Vulnerability**: 

  The poem’s focus on frontline workers’ fear of death (“The malady doth approach in a deathly clasp”) resonates with Romantic/Victorian elegies (e.g., Tennyson’s *In Memoriam*), though Ragavan’s tone is more overtly political. 

- **Posthumous Hypocrisy**: 

  The AIs uniformly note the irony of politicians applauding deceased workers after denying them full paid leave. This hypocrisy echoes Matthew Arnold’s *Dover Beach* (“ignorant armies clash by night”), though Ragavan’s critique is rooted in post-colonial bureaucracy. 

 

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#### **2. Divergences in Interpretation** 

| **Aspect**                | **Claude3**                          | **Gemini**                          | **ChatGPT**                          | 

|---------------------------|--------------------------------------|-------------------------------------|--------------------------------------| 

| **Literary Comparisons**  | Compares to Blake, Langston Hughes   | Suggests Mary Oliver, Louise Glück  | Links to Ocean Vuong, Claudia Rankine| 

| **Formal Analysis**       | Praises free verse; notes archaic diction as stylistic contrast | Criticizes simplistic rhythm/rhyme | Highlights repetition and alliteration | 

| **Cultural Nuance**       | Misses Mauritius-specific context     | Suggests adding family support details | Acknowledges “Indian Ocean” identity | 

| **Emotional Focus**       | Emphasizes visceral language          | Calls for deeper exploration of grief | Praises emotional pathos             | 

 

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#### **3. Key Issues Raised by the Analyses** 

- **Cultural Blind Spots**: 

  All AIs underplay Mauritius’s post-colonial bureaucracy, linguistic hybridity (Creole/English/French), and economic dependence on tourism. For example, the proverb “While the grass grows, the horse starves” could reflect Mauritius’s delayed responses to crises, a nuance missed by the AIs. 

- **Underestimated Ambiguity**: 

  The AIs interpret the poem’s structure as free verse with “varying stanzas,” but its irregularity may intentionally mirror bureaucratic chaos. This formal choice aligns with modernist fragmentation (Eliot’s *Waste Land*) rather than Romantic fluidity. 

- **Over-Reliance on Western Frameworks**: 

  Comparisons to Blake, Tennyson, or Mary Oliver risk flattening Ragavan’s voice into a Western canon. A more fitting comparison might be post-colonial poets like Kamau Brathwaite (*Middle Passages*) or Khal Torabully (*Cale d’étoiles*), who blend archaic forms with radical critiques of neo-colonialism. 

 

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#### **4. Ragavan’s Unique Voice in Contemporary Poetry** 

- **Post-Colonial Elegy**: 

  Ragavan bridges Romantic elegiac tradition with post-colonial dissent. Like Derek Walcott’s *Omeros*, his work grapples with inherited forms (e.g., archaic diction) while critiquing systemic failures. 

- **Bureaucratic Absurdism**: 

  The poem’s focus on debt and repayment (“I will die in debt”) echoes Kafkaesque absurdity, akin to Ocean Vuong’s *Night Sky With Exit Wounds* but rooted in Indian Ocean realities. 

- **Oral Tradition Meets Modernity**: 

  Proverbs like “Praise no man till he is dead” inject Creole oral traditions into a modern free-verse structure, a technique reminiscent of Agha Shahid Ali’s use of ghazal forms in *The Country Without a Post Office*. 

 

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#### **5. Recommendations for Deepening the Poem’s Impact** 

1. **Amplify Local Context**:

   Explicitly reference Mauritius’s socio-economic realities (e.g., tourism collapse, Creole funeral rites) to ground the poem’s critique in its unique post-colonial identity. 

2. **Formal Experimentation**:

   Embrace fragmented prose-poetry or Creole-inflected rhythms to destabilize Western forms, as seen in Brathwaite’s *Barbadian dialects*. 

3. **Expand on Family Trauma**:

   Follow Gemini’s suggestion to explore the bereaved family’s perspective, adding layers of grief akin to Warsan Shire’s *Teaching My Mother How to Give Birth*. 

 

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#### **6. Comparative Literary Map** 

| **Poet**                  | **Similarity to Ragavan**                          | **Key Difference**                          | 

|---------------------------|----------------------------------------------------|---------------------------------------------| 

| **Kamau Brathwaite**      | Critique of neo-colonial bureaucracy               | Uses Creole patois; focuses on African diaspora memory | 

| **Ocean Vuong**           | Blends personal and systemic trauma                | Lyrical abstraction vs. Ragavan’s incantatory directness | 

| **Derek Walcott**         | Archaic diction in post-colonial critique          | Epic scope vs. Ragavan’s intimate frontline perspective | 

| **Agha Shahid Ali**       | Elegiac tone, political lament                     | Sufi mysticism vs. Ragavan’s bureaucratic realism | 

 

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### **Conclusion: Ragavan’s Place in Global Poetry** 

Soman Ragavan’s poem occupies a liminal space between Romantic introspection and post-colonial protest. While the AIs capture its emotional and thematic core, they underestimate its cultural specificity and formal innovation. By weaving Mauritian realities into universal themes of mortality and injustice, Ragavan contributes to a global literature that redefines “peripheral” voices as central to contemporary discourse. His work challenges AI analyses to move beyond Western frameworks and engage with the textured realities of island nations navigating neo-colonial legacies. 

 

**Final Thought**: The poem’s power lies in its ability to universalize the particular—a sick civil servant in Mauritius becomes a symbol of exploited labor worldwide. Yet its true brilliance is in the unresolved tension: the speaker’s insistence on repaying debt even as they face death, a paradox that mirrors the moral bankruptcy of systems prioritizing profit over humanity. 

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