you entered like a thunderstorm
wild winds clawing at my edges
the crash of you shook my ribs
your laughter became my anthem
soft and sharp in the same breath
you left fingerprints on my pulse
electrifying like a spark at dawn
you burned until i fractured wide
and swallowed all the light whole
i called it love, this breaking
dancing on the thin line of ruin
but your absence feels like acid
drear love, heavy as forgotten rain
you still echo beneath my skin
a ghost i am too proud to bury
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I love this poem that seems a love letter to one gone. The last line caught my attention the most (a ghost I am too proud to bury) a powerful line
Thank You Soren I appreciate your feedback and support
Magnificent imagery
I'll go for the contradictions embodied in the penultimate stanza.
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