Spinning Hoops

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R.I.P Dioga Jota
A man who gave joy and pleasure, and played with a smile on his face.

Spinning Hoops.

 

Acrobatically Jumping Through Spinning Hoops

Assembled Uneducated Opinions Trudge Along Divisive Paths

Self-Proclaimed Masters Abattoir Awaits.

 

Tobani June 2025.

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  • David Wakeling

    haiku is a difficult skill but i think you have done really well.I enjoyed reading.Well done

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  • sorenbarrett

    This is a most intriguing write and the use of abattoir is quite creative. This is a write that takes the mind by the reigns and goes for a long ride. Very nide

  • Damaso

    I see a very accurate prophecy that worries me greatly. "God, give me patience, because if you give me strength, I'll kill them all," my grandmother used to say. Thank you for sharing your writing, sir. It's always a pleasure to read it. Greetings.

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    • Tony36

      Great write

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        • Tony36

          You're welcome

        • Salvia.S

          A powerful and evocative piece!

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          • MendedFences27

            Nice one LP. Seems very relevant to today's situation. Seems the spinning hoops are self-created. Enjoyed this poem. - Phil A.

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            • John Prophet

              Nicely done with this one.👍🏼

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              • Thomas W Case

                Superb.

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                • Doggerel Dave

                  Not sure about the Abattoir, but in my fantasy land I do hope for a Grand Clearance....

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                  • Cheeky Missy

                    My la! That's a mouthful which I shan't parse with a dictionary, though I should. Prettily rendered with a fascinating poignancy. Thank you for sharing.

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