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Wishing Good Luck
To The
England Team For The
Final.
Wishing Good Luck
To The
England Team For The
Final.
Spinning Hoops.
Acrobatically Jumping Through Spinning Hoops
Assembled Uneducated Opinions Trudge Along Divisive Paths
Self-Proclaimed Masters Abattoir Awaits.
Tobani June 2025.
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Tobani / Nataiella (Pseudonym) (
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haiku is a difficult skill but i think you have done really well.I enjoyed reading.Well done
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This is a most intriguing write and the use of abattoir is quite creative. This is a write that takes the mind by the reigns and goes for a long ride. Very nide
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I see a very accurate prophecy that worries me greatly. "God, give me patience, because if you give me strength, I'll kill them all," my grandmother used to say. Thank you for sharing your writing, sir. It's always a pleasure to read it. Greetings.
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Great write
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You're welcome
A powerful and evocative piece!
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Nice one LP. Seems very relevant to today's situation. Seems the spinning hoops are self-created. Enjoyed this poem. - Phil A.
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Nicely done with this one.👍🏼
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Superb.
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Not sure about the Abattoir, but in my fantasy land I do hope for a Grand Clearance....
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My la! That's a mouthful which I shan't parse with a dictionary, though I should. Prettily rendered with a fascinating poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
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Had to look that word up! Now that I know the meaning I totally concur!
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