What's in you, you find in another, insecurity is its mother...................................so queer
Born lack of trust deep inside, from womb it bursts not to confide.. ...................it's here
Clawing to hold on, fearing it'll soon be gone .......................................................growing fear
Suspicion born seeds in a social garden grows thorn and weeds.......................... threats appear
Control seen as a tool to command a world seen as cruel......................................so austere
Deck stacked, I feel attacked.... ..............................................................................be severe
Protection a must, total lack of trust................................................................... ....steer clear
Them you need to do before they get you ..............................................................make them disappear
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Clever and a bit ominous!
Thank you so much for the read and most kind words of support they are most appreciated.
This is quite an interesting new style.It resembles a List of contents of a book. Ranging from Suspicion, insecurity and trust issue and there origins.It is however a little sinister in that it ends with the need for Protection.Fascinating piece.Made me stop and think
Thank you David for your read and kind comments they are valued. Yes it just occurred to me the other day that this might be something to try. One might take it as they wish, a table of contents with listing of what to expect in each, a thought with a following thought, a thought and a consequence, whatever.
A very intriguing write, we have them insecurities some of us in bucket loads, and we should protect ourselves better against them, as they can so easily be our downfall, really enjoyed the read
Thank you Tobani I rarely stray from traditional format but this time I thought (oh what the hell) I'll try this and see how it works. I appreciate your support my friend.
You are very welcome, it works well
Thoughtful and truthful with haunting rhythm. Very well written!
Thank you Salvia for your read and kind words of support they are always most appreciated
"Born lack of trust deep inside, from womb it bursts not to confide... ...................it's here." I have to say, my friend, it shook my head this morning. Thanks so much for sharing. One of my favorites! Cheers
Thank you Damaso for the read and the kind words of support they are deeply appreciated and cherished.
Excellent write
Thank you so much Tony I appreciate it
You're welcome
Such an interesting structure and a very intriguing read. Well done.
Just a thought as a breakaway form my traditional form. Thank you so much for the read and kind comment.
Interesting form SB. Well rhymed also. Such insecurity can and does destroy lives. Some end up living alone like a hermit. - Phil A.
Thank you so much for the read and kind words it is always appreciated
“ Control seen as a tool to command a world seen as cruel....” so true…..
Thank you John for your visit and your support it is most appreciated.
Superb. Very creative.
Thanks so much Thomas appreciate it
find the answers suggested very fascinating and agree with quite a few
thanks for sharing
Thank you so much Nafisa for your read and comment they are most valued
most welcome
have a great weekend - take care
Very beautiful
"Severe protection a must, total lack of trust" caught my eyes.
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