Tears;

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Funny how

Ethereal tears

Carry so much weight


  • Author: Sylva (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: June 13th, 2025 01:09
  • Comment from author about the poem: Water and salt are both essential for life. And i think, how poetic of God to put them both in our tears ⭑
  • Category: Sad
  • Views: 12
  • Users favorite of this poem: Poetic Licence, Devender Kumar, lostinfantasy
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  • sorenbarrett

    Tears such a weak poetic word but so frequently used and here it is used with weight and power. It is indeed most metaphoric the issue of water and salt as if the sea and how eyes are cast as lipid pools. This poem in its brevity is like a single tear that calls attention to a mood to those that are listening. Very nice

  • Poetic Licence

    I had never thought of tears like that before, a lovely write, short but very powerful in its message, enjoyed the read

  • lostinfantasy

    I really like your comment and thought about this piece... I've never realized this! Thanks!



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