it kinda sucks here
the rich hates unfortunates
yet still needs us all….
sigh…
all haiku aside;
when you walk into a building
how can you not give thanks
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Author:
Demar Desu (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: 2 haikus in one… sometimes the truth needs more truth to be understood… YO YALL NEED TO GO BUY MY BOOK IM BROKE!!!
- Category: Haiku
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The rich do need the poor to harvest their food and make their toys, to work in their factories as cheap labor so they can compete with their other rich neighbor. But the rich have never held the help as equals. Nicely written
It’s funny you use the word poor…… would you consider the rich to be fortunate? (Slight pun)
Love puns
I concur! BUY DEMAR'S BOOK! I did! ❤️🙃 It rocks! As for your poem, excellent, my friend. Profoundly true.
TRL THANK YOU!!!
You are most welcome, my friend! From one broke poet to the next! 🤣
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