Junk

sorenbarrett

Scraps are all that remain in my poem's domain, late, the muse retired
From trash to obtain a single refrain, from broken pieces once inspired
Tarnished with rust, covered with dust, I, glue bits and broken pieces
From decay of past dismay, mended hope somehow increases

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  • Lorenz

    From these scraps shines the gold of times !

    • sorenbarrett

      Thanks Lorenz your words are most encouraging and deeply appreciated.

    • David Wakeling

      For me this is a little despairing although it ends in hope. It is a tough analysis of the state of your poetry. I am here to say that your poetry is amazing and I hope you continue writing.Take heart better days ahead

      • sorenbarrett

        You are very kind David. Written in one of those moments where the muse has gone to bed and yet looking amongst past poetic scraps for inspiration for another poem. Thank you so much for the read and reassurance it is most encouraging.

      • teardrop

        Love the description of poems past, well and maybe even current. Well thats what popped in my mind. Writers block? Or the words you write aren;t exactly what your looking for. We as writers are our own worse critics. At least that is the was I took this piece. but hey, I enjoyed reading your words and the metaphors were well worth the read. Thank you for making me think this early morning. As well as the smile of my face, Very well thought out .

        • sorenbarrett

          Thank you so much for your kind and comforting words. As poets many of us keep past scraps discarded from past poems, this is my junk pile that I sort through when the muse is sleeping. Your words are most appreciated

        • Soman Ragavan

          It happens to writers. Sometimes it's a travel through a desert. The words, the ideas don't turn up. Inspiration is a mystery and is beyond anyone's control. When it happens you must make the most of it. Reading Wordsworth's (1770-1850) work, you will notice that as from a certain point, his writings became rather bland.

          • sorenbarrett

            Thank you so much Soman for your review and kind words of reassurance they are most valued and appreciated. Dry spells happen to us all when the muse sleeps and we need the patience to await their awakening.

          • Jerry Reynolds

            Good write, SB. Rambling through the clutter-land of my mind OH the things I find.

            • sorenbarrett

              Thank you so much Jerry I deeply appreciate your read and words. Yes I keep a note of scraps and out of this discarded junk pile I rummage when the muse is resting.

            • Poetic Licence

              That is an incredibly harsh self critiques of ones poetry from a wonderful writer, that gives so much pleasure in their writing,

              • sorenbarrett

                I thank you so much Tobani self flagellation is often seen amongst fanatic believers. Self torture promotes the heights and depths of creation. I appreciate your support and kindness as I dig through past discarded trash that may now be treasure.

                • Poetic Licence

                  You are very welcome

                • arqios

                  May it continue to increase! ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป๐Ÿ•Š

                  • sorenbarrett

                    Thank you so much Cryptic for the read and kind wishes they are cherished

                  • Tristan Robert Lange

                    Writer's block. The muse takes a vacay. Every writer's dread turned into an eventual triumph. And, look what we have here, a poem about junk that isn't junk at all! That's the beauty of it really. Even when all we have are scraps of ideas left over of what we wanted to write, even when the muse has gone, something brilliant can emerge. This is one such emergence, my friend. Well done! ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ‘

                    • sorenbarrett

                      Thank you so much Tristan for your support and kind words. Yes I keep those scraps rejected from previous poems and at such times rummage through them.

                    • orchidee

                      Ahh, more ideas for KP's dinners - scraps, junk, sewage, debris, trash, etc. She loves 'em! lol.

                      • sorenbarrett

                        So kind that you give her those things that she loves. Thanks for the read Orchi

                      • Mottakeenur Rehman

                        Even in decay, your verses shineโ€”mending despair into hope, one scrap at a time.

                        • sorenbarrett

                          Thank you Mottakeenur for your most poetic response to this piece. Your kind reassurance is deeply valued and appreciated.

                        • Tony Grannell

                          Like a ruderal bloom appearing out of the junk in this splendid poem. Sometimes the subject of a poem can distract from its excellence, as is the case here. I always love reading your poetry but this one really got me. Line into line with perfect continuity and wording balances the poem complete in its artistry. If you found this one in the trash, please keep searching. Excellent, Soren, truly.

                          All the best,

                          Tony.

                          • sorenbarrett

                            You are too kind Tony. Coming from a poet of your stature this means a great deal and has made my day. Thank you Tony

                          • NafisaSB

                            Beautiful

                            • sorenbarrett

                              Thank you Nafisa I appreciate your kind word of support

                              • NafisaSB

                                always welcome. have a good week ahead

                              • NafisaSB

                              • Reynaldo Casison


                                Nice one soren

                                Poignantly optimistic

                                • sorenbarrett

                                  Thank you Reynaldo for your read and comment it is always most appreciated

                                • Teddy.15

                                  Wow and yes what a poet you are. ๐ŸŒน

                                  • sorenbarrett

                                    Thank you Teddy you are too kind.

                                  • Kevin Hulme

                                    Yes good one.

                                    • sorenbarrett

                                      Thank you so much Kevin. Your read and comment mean a great deal and are most appreciated

                                    • Salvia.S

                                      A poignant and evocative piece. Well done!

                                      • sorenbarrett

                                        Thank you Salvia for your review and encouragement it is most appreciated

                                      • NafisaSB

                                        even what seems like junk has given way to a beautiful poem, and hope.
                                        all the best

                                        • sorenbarrett

                                          Thank you Nafisa I appreciate your review and kind words of support.

                                          • NafisaSB

                                            most welcome
                                            thanks for sharing

                                          • Timothy Hilary Musa

                                            Waw

                                            • sorenbarrett

                                              I thank you Timothy for your read of this older piece it is most appreciated

                                              • Timothy Hilary Musa

                                                Stay safe dear

                                              • saswati das

                                                Loved it!!!!



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