A Forever Moment

Mottakeenur Rehman


The sun ascends... then bleeds into night,
Rain tells its secrets, then slips from sight.
Darkness lifts—dawn carves its line,
Dawn dissolves—stars drift, redefined.
Twilight lingers, half-dreamed, half-true...
The world exhales—and so do you.

In winter’s clasp, I chase the sun’s last breath,
In summer’s blaze, it trails my every step.
The seasons pivot on time’s slow wheel—
This is how love turns, this is what we feel:
A forever moment, too vast to reveal.

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  • sorenbarrett

    This poem is so nicely worded and diverse in its scope. A lovely read

    • Mottakeenur Rehman

      Thanks a lot for your precious comment!πŸ™πŸ™

    • Poetic Licence

      Associating nature seasons and there cycle with the cycle of love, enjoyed the read

    • arqios

      So many feelings pop up as I read through this. Good stuff mateπŸ•ŠπŸ™πŸ»

      • Mottakeenur Rehman

        Thank youπŸ™πŸ™

        • arqios

          Most welcome, friendπŸ™πŸ»πŸ•ŠοΈ

        • RSM0812

          A unique poem comparing nature to love. Well written and thought up with good verses, imagery and rhyme. Nice job.



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