The Silent King, who once had wings,
Set out to find his bride.
With leather pack upon his back
A steed to match his stride,
He left his cold and silent throne
To wander far from sacred stone
Until he saw, by river’s bend,
A girl who walked alone.
Her hair was pale, like winter's frost,
Her smile soft and shy.
But deep within, a truth was hid
A secret she let lie.
For in a cave not far from there
A shameful love she kept:
A monster, fierce and full of fire,
Whose name she softly wept.
Yet to this beast, her heart belonged,
His rage she calmed with grace.
He sang to her in broken tones
And touched her tear-streaked face.
Her monster, kind in shadow’s veil,
Had taught her how to feel
Though clothed in claw and furnace breath,
His love alone was real.
But now the King, with quiet steps,
Had seen her golden glow.
And in his chest, a hunger stirred
For things he could not know.
He watched her laugh beneath the trees,
Unknowing she was seen.
He dreamed of crowns upon her brow,
Of making her his queen.
But in her gaze, no throne was found,
No yearning for a crown
Only whispers to the darkened cave
Where her monster settled down.
The beast she loved had once worn skin
As fine as any lord’s,
A prince who dared to challenge fate
And drew the cursed sword.
He struck a deal beneath the earth,
In caverns carved by gods
To save his kin from death and drought,
He bore the demon's odds.
Now cloaked in horn and molten flesh,
With breath like burning coal,
He wandered far from human lands,
A shadow with a soul.
And in his chest, a heart remained,
Though twisted by the spell
It beat for her, so soft and pure,
The girl who loved him well.
The Silent King, with jealous ache,
Crept close one moonless night.
He saw the two—her hand in his
Bathe softly in star-light.
And when he heard her call him kind,
And kiss his broken face,
The King grew cold and made a vow
To end the beast’s disgrace.
He told himself, “This cannot be
No monster knows of love.
She’s trapped by charm or sorcery,
Not blessed from skies above.”
So come the dawn, with crown in hand,
He summoned her with pride.
She met him there, with tearful eyes,
And gently stepped aside.
“My heart,” she said, “is not for kings
It’s buried in the cave.
For there he waits, my cursed one,
Who chose the world to save.”
But kings don't yield, and so he swore
To break what should not be
To slay the beast and claim the maid,
And set her spirit free.
He gathered flame and silver blade,
And soldiers clad in fear.
They marched into the trembling earth
To end what she held dear
They found him where the shadows bled,
Alone upon the stone,
His eyes aglow with quiet grief,
His silence all his own.
He did not fight nor bare his teeth,
But stood to meet the flame
For monsters born of cursed vows
Do not deny their shame.
The King stepped forth, with sword in hand,
His voice like thunder rolled:
“Release the girl, forsake her name,
This love is weak and cold.”
But the beast knelt low and bowed his head,
No hatred in his frame
“I’d die a thousand burning deaths
To see her love remain.”
The soldiers faltered in their stance,
Uneased by what they saw.
This beast, so still—no snarling jaws
Just sorrow carved by law.
The King, enraged, drove sword to flesh
The cave rang out with cries.
The monster fell but cursed no soul
He only closed his eyes.
The girl arrived with windswept hair,
Too late to stop the end.
She dropped beside his ruined form,
And held him like a friend.
“O foolish kings and fearful men,
You’ve slain what made me whole.
You saw a beast, but never heard
The mercy in his soul.”
She kissed the last breath from his lips,
Then raised her tear-streaked face
And in that cave, the mountain shook,
As though to mark the place.
For curses bound by sacrifice
Do not so lightly fade
And when she wept, the air grew still,
The shadows bent and swayed.
A voice, both hers and not her own,
Rose low from deep below:
“You took my love, now take my grief
Let all the kingdoms know.
That love once scorned and buried deep
Will never rest in stone.
And kings who steal from cursed hearts
Shall wander lost, alone.”
The King escaped,
But not his fate, nor shame.
He walks the peaks where once he ruled,
Still whispering her name.
The maiden’s song the wind now sings,
A warning sharp and true
Not every monster in the dark
Is half as dark as you.
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Author:
Mary73223 (
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- Published: June 14th, 2025 21:11
- Category: Fable
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- Users favorite of this poem: sorenbarrett, Poetic Licence
Comments3
Hello to anyone reading this. This is my first fable Ive written to competition. And Im a bit embarrassed to admit it's taking me a little over 7 months to write this, and get the rhyme scheme just the way I wanted it. If you have any constructive feedback please let me know. Ive been writing poetry for over 5 years no and Im always looking to improve.
I must congratulate you on a most wonderful fable and poem. It reads so smoothly and the fable itself is classical and well crafted it immediately caught my attention and kept it throughout. The only minor suggestion I might make is the second to the last stanza seems to have an extra line that would sound better as the first line of the last stanza. Or the last two stanza's may be combined into one. Otherwise I wouldn't alter what seems perfect. A definite fave
I thoroughly enjoyed the read, kept me interested all the way through, nicely expressed and crafted, enjoyed the read
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