I asked for persistence
And you led with indifference
hot, heavy breaths
barely acknowledged my existence
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Author:
Gloria Denise (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: the title speaks for itself
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It does speak for itself, few words that say so much, lovely write
A feeling of rejection in this poem that in its brevity is clear in its message.
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