A disturbing flow
is contained by those who resist.
The leader never shows
a shred of doubt,
even if he finds himself
mortally wounded.
On the other hand,
he awaits, mercilessly,
the final blow.
They guard, hermetically,
their firm gestures:
immaculate pride, fire!
Silence is the voice of God.
The voice in my first yesterday,
tears slide
before a still face.
Eternal fury,
forgiving vengeance.
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Author:
Pari4 (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: It contains the sound of a sad tuning fork, a contained sea waiting to overflow the world.
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Comments5
"Silence is the voice of God." A profound line in a sea of profound lines. Wonderful job, my friend. 🌹👏
I'm so glad you enjoyed it; a drunken, cathartic piece of writing. Thank you so much for stopping by. Best regards.
Sometimes, the kind that is needed! You are most welcome!
Spiritual in nature with religious overtones this poem feels threatening. Well done.
Thank you so much for your words of encouragement and for stopping by. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Writing it was a great relief. Best regards.
A dark, angry and spiritual write, possibly the anger being aimed at god. Forgiving Vengeance, a frightening thought, the read grabs you by the horns and says listen, nicely expressed and written
I'm glad you enjoyed it. It was a very relaxing piece, with a gentle tone, but it's not meant to be a divine outcry. Thank you so much for stopping by and leaving your words of encouragement. Best regards.
You are very welcome
Excellent write
Thank you so much, my friend, for stopping by and for your words of encouragement. Best regards.
You're welcome
great write
Thank you so much for stopping by and sharing your words of encouragement. Best regards.
you are most welcome
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