he dreamed of wild horses on asphalt
feet itching for a mustang’s roar
but life hums steady not reckless
a used outback parked outside
feet itching for a mustang’s roar
his eyes flickered with quiet rebellion
a used outback parked outside
a lesson nestled in worn leather seats
his eyes flickered with quiet rebellion
patience must learn to hold the wheel
a lesson nestled in worn leather seats
freedom comes with what you earn
patience must learn to hold the wheel
but life hums steady not reckless
freedom comes with what you earn
he dreamed of wild horses on asphalt
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Author:
gray0328 (
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They call it horsepower for a good reason. Nicely written Gray it speaks of freedom and of open roads. Lovely
A very enjoyable read of having the freedom of the open highway in a wonderful car, enjoyed
In very few actual lines you painted a complete picture of longing. Really neat but strong.
PS: Is that a form with a name?
Pantoum is the form. Thank You for sharing your feedback
Thanks for the info. Felt a really well constructed picture with simple materials. Much appreciated.
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