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Congratulations
To the England team
Great performance tonight
Congratulations
To the England team
Great performance tonight
Do Not Be a Beaver.
Do Not Be a Beaver
In Life
And constantly build
Those Dams.
Tobani April 2025.
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Tobani / Nataiella (Pseudonym) (
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- Published: June 18th, 2025 02:24
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A good message my friend dams in social, interpersonal, personal, financial, or even inner understanding. Nicely broad in few words.
Thank you, have fun
yes I agree.Many people put up walls that block them getting to live life.Good advice here
Thank you, have fun
Hahaha! You're a riot. But there's an inextricably good reason they build those dams, ergo.... This is too fun. Thank you so, so very much for sharing.
You have to let some things through, thank you for your feedback, have a wonderful day
And for us the walls do come crashing down at the right time an with the right people and circumstance.๐๐ป๐
Thank you, that reminds me of a song, enjoy the rest of your day
Something about the battle of Jericho, perhaps? ๐๐๐ป๐๐ฅณ๐ค
Walls coming crashing down, i am not sure but i think something from a Style Council record
Oh, must look that up๐๐ป
Not sure if Style Council or Jam but certain it is Paul Weller
Its Style Councilโฆ โWalls Come Tumbling Downโ
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YjEtIYBRhHU
My rusty cogs turned correctly for once
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Excellent write, PL. Excellent advice.
Thank you, enjoy the rest of your day
Clever and conciseโa poignant reminder to flow freely, not trap ourselves in endless cycles. Lovely metaphor!
Thank you, very much appreciated
Unless you are ACTUALLY a beaver, I 150% concur! And if you are that actual beaver, please avoid the creek by my yard! LOL! But, all jokes aside, this is profoundly wise advice for us humans beavers to take! Cut out the beaver behavior, be a human! ๐คฃ
Thank you, have a good day
You are welcome.
Thought this was personal advice directed at a civil engineer tasked with building another of them environmentally dubious constructions...........
It very well could be, but more in general about life, thank you for your feedback, enjoy your day
We must build bridges in our life Tobani.
Andy
Bridges yes because things can still pass through or under, dams in life we build to many, have a wonderful day
Nice one Tobani
Insightful and witty
Thank you
Great advice ๐
Thank you, enjoy the rest of your day
yes - i did, and the weekend was good
hope yours was too..
Thank you
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