Live Life Like A Sponge (Senryu) Go On Read It , You Might Like It!!!.

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Live Life Like a Sponge.

 

Live Life Like a Sponge

In Absorbing Everything You See and Hear

That Enables You to Expand.

 

Tobani June 2025.

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  • arqios

    Expansion is seen as a blessed life🕊️🙏🏻

  • Mottakeenur Rehman

    Clever metaphor—sponges teach us growth through openness!
    Absorb, expand, and thrive—wise words to live by.

  • David Wakeling

    Thats very clever.Well done.

  • sorenbarrett

    A good image presented Tobani absorbing does expand the mind and the acceptance of other culture's, religions, gender and differences in general. Very nice my friend

  • Thomas W Case

    Fantastic.

  • Tristan Robert Lange

    Not going to lie, I thought you were going to talk about a life living in a pineapple under the sea while in tighty whiteys. Ahoy, matey! All jokes aside, this is a most profound and truthful poem, my friend, and a fave. 🌹👏

    • Poetic Licence

      Now That`s an idea!, Thank you for feedback, have a good weekend.

    • Doggerel Dave

      An image now filed under 'tools' and incorporated into a part of me now. the senryu form has real truth sometimes.

      Thanks Tobani.

      • Poetic Licence

        Thank you for your feedback, very much appreciated

      • Goldfinch60

        So very true Tobani, but my life has expanded for so long that the sponge is now leaking. LOL

        Andy

        • Poetic Licence

          Try to save the leakage incase a dry spell comes along!!, thank you for your feedback, have a great weekend

        • Mutley Ravishes

          I remember reading that when contraction reaches a point where it can't contract anymore it naturally starts to expand.
          Great write.

        • NafisaSB

          Yes it’s a good idea to absorb whatever would help us to expand
          I would welcome the experience
          Good write

          • Poetic Licence

            Thank you, much appreciated

            • NafisaSB

              you are always welcome



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