I feel inspired but never fully wired,
That control over me just expired,
A far cry away from being retired,
Hobbiting around like we've all been shired,
Not looking for salvation, claiming you're too tired,
Slaving away for money sluts, you've been hired.
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Shaunmatthewcpoetry (
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Now that is a fun aa rhyme scheme with a fun message that is true as well. Too close to home? Too bad. I loved it
Thanks, glad you loved it, it was fun!
'Strange women' as some versions of the Bible put it!
Haha!
All I can say to this is: TRUTH. Well said. 🌹👏
Cheers!
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