A ghost!
It stood transfixed,
With rhythmic pulsing ebbing-
And shaking boney hands,
Which hovered forming death - and
Engulfed the room with haste.
A journey rippled forward,
Which showed a world devine,
It planted deep inside - and
Then carried something free,
As if unfixed - unbodied.
Seducing every nerve,
Within my flowing curves - and
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Author:
A.L.H (Pseudonym) (
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Loved the undetermined ending of the poem. A haunting poem that seems a conscience personified.
Thank you! 🙂 I wanted to leave it ambiguous - very much inspired by Emily Dickenson ❤️
This is a nicely put together write, and I love the ending, leaving it open to be anything could happen, enjoyed the read
Exactly, lets each person decide for themselves what happened and why ect..
Im glad you liked it! Thank-you:)
You are very welcome
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