Three days he stayed—then slipped away,
his boat a ghost at break of day.
I caught his face in silver light,
lips cracked with cold, hands bleached and white.
No grief for palms that hauled the dead,
yet left no crumb where children tread.
I see him still—his lantern’s flame,
a drowning sun no dawn could name.
She loved the vastness of the Bay—
its salted breath, its wild ballet.
But now she fears even that sea;
its hunger gnaws her memory.
“He ruled the waves,” his widow said,
her voice a hook I still have bled.
“Once...” she tried—I turned to stone.
“No child of mine will starve alone.”
Why? The wind clawed at the door.
She gripped the chair, and spoke no more—
Now, inside her chest, lies a mournful sea,
where tides of silence drown her plea.
“The sea returns no borrowed breath.
I’ll trade no more my love for death.”
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Author:
Mottakeenur Rehman (
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- Published: June 21st, 2025 04:00
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Comments2
Mottakeenur you outdo yourself. Another most wonderful poem that pulls at the heart with line after line of great poetry. To cite one would do disservice to the others unless the whole poem was cited. Brilliant! and a fave
I am pleased to see your compliments or kind words ..I am always awestruck by your words❤️🙏❤️
My pleasure
A touching and sad of a women reflecting on the sacrifices her husband made to provide and wishing he could return, then accepting he is not coming back and now remembering the love instead, lovely write, enjoyed the read
Thank you so much my friend 🙏❤️🙏
You are very welcome
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