Suicide in Sweden:
It’s cold, like the knife that glides across skin. Bleeding out, but it’s always there. And it cracks beneath me, the ice cracks beneath me. I’m sorry I didn’t say more, I’m sorry I couldn’t say more. My fingers they go numb, unlike the mind that always has been. I wanted to say everything, and I wanted to say nothing, all at the same time. And yeah, I wanted to say everything, was it better that I said nothing?
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Author:
Georgia Watson (
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- Published: June 25th, 2025 06:30
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Comments7
Poetic in its saying of so much in so little and in this case a life time amount in saying nothing. Well written
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A sense of some one crying out to be heard and listening to, but to scared to speak. A powerful write written really nicely
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You are very welcome
Wow! This hits because I have been there to the brink and I know what it is like. This nails it. Well done, Georgia! You are a most profound poet, my friend! 🌹👏
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You are most welcome. Have a great day!
BRAVO
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This is one of the first like very first poems I really wrote
You said it all... Your poem is expressive; I enjoyed it because of what you said.
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very sad and haunting - glad you lived to tell the tale, though, and wishing you speedy deliverance
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