as I look out over
the expanse of our love,
I cannot help but lift my head
to the divines
above.
"please," I would beg them.
"do not let me stray,
for this man is all I know
and all I have
until I fade away."
the divine devices must have heard
since down from the sky came
a noble cherub with golden locks.
he said,
"who are you to blame?"
"you have given him all of you,
and you'd gladly give him more.
you know he is your one true love,
but he views you as a whore."
at this, a gasp escaped me.
could it be, that he thought of me so low?
the cherub did its job, ascended,
and I felt the body of my love.
at least now I know.
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Offline) - Published: June 25th, 2025 13:09
- Category: Gothic
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Comments4
A poem that starts so bright and full of love descends to the tree of knowledge that casts one out of the garden's bliss to a harsh world and pain. Dark is the night. A most thought provoking poem and a fave
This is a write to make you think from floating in the cloud of love to having a dagger stuck in the heart. Very well written taken you from one extreme to the other, enjoyed the read
Excellent write
Powerful, evocative, and exactly everything Soren wrote. A must fave for me too. ๐๐น
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