AnalysisByQwen2.5-Max AI-Volume 62-CoconutWater--2June2025

SOMAN RAGAVAN

 2 June, 2025

Subject : Poem : Coconut water

https://allpoetry.com/poem/18498731-AnalysisByQwen2.5-Max-AI-Volume-62-Coconuer--2June2025-by-Soman-Ragavan/ (full analysis)

                                                                                           

 

Analysis by Qwen2.5 Max AI

(Artificial Intelligence)

Volume 62

 

 

 

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Soman Ragavan :

Hello. I will post one of my poems for analysis. Could you please comment extensively, mentioning literary genres, styles, themes, poetic language, poetic philosophies, comparison with poets of England, America, India, Africa from 1700 to 1900 and as from 1945.

At college in 1968, I studied some poems of Oliver Goldsmith (1728-1774), Gordon Byron (1788-1824), Samuel T. Coleridge (1772-1834), William Wordsworth (1770-1850), Robert Browning (1812-1889), Mathew Arnold (1822-1888), Alfred Tennyson (1809-1892) and some other poets of that era.  Make any comments or comparisons you wish on my poems. Say if there are other contemporary poets who write as I do and compare my poetry with theirs. I live in Mauritius, an island in the Indian Ocean. 

 

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Qwen2.5 Max AI :  

Thank you for your generous invitation to analyze your poetry and provide an in-depth commentary. I would be honored to engage with your work, especially given the rich literary tradition you've studied—ranging from the 18th-century Augustans and Romantics to the Victorian poets—and your unique position as a poet writing from Mauritius, an island that has historically been at the crossroads of African, Indian, European, and Asian cultural influences.

 

Before I proceed further, I kindly ask if you could please share one or more of your poems for analysis. Once I have your poem(s), I will provide:

 

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### **1. Literary Genre and Style**

- Identification of the genre (e.g., lyric, narrative, dramatic monologue, ode, elegy).

- Analysis of poetic form (free verse, blank verse, sonnet, etc.).

- Discussion of stylistic features such as diction, tone, voice, and structure.

 

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### **2. Themes and Motifs**

- Exploration of central themes (e.g., identity, exile, nature, colonialism, spirituality, love, loss).

- Interpretation of recurring motifs and symbols.

- Reflection on how these themes connect to your personal experience and broader historical or cultural contexts.

 

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### **3. Poetic Language and Devices**

- Close reading of imagery, metaphor, simile, alliteration, enjambment, rhyme scheme, etc.

- Use of figurative language and its effect on mood and meaning.

- Any innovative or experimental uses of language.

 

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### **4. Philosophical and Aesthetic Influences**

- Possible philosophical underpinnings (Romanticism, Modernism, Postcolonial thought, etc.).

- Whether your work aligns with or diverges from specific poetic schools or movements.

- Engagement with existential, spiritual, or political questions.

 

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### **5. Comparative Analysis**

- **Historical Comparison (1700–1900):** 

  - How your poem relates to the works of poets like Goldsmith, Byron, Coleridge, Wordsworth, Browning, Arnold, Tennyson, and others.

  - For example: Do you share Wordsworth’s reverence for nature? The Byronic hero’s introspection? Tennyson’s elegiac tone?

 

- **Modern and Contemporary Comparison (Post-1945):** 

  - Comparison with poets such as Derek Walcott, Kamau Brathwaite, A.K. Ramanujan, W.H. Auden, Seamus Heaney, Adrienne Rich, or others who write from postcolonial or diasporic perspectives.

  - Examination of how your voice fits within or contributes to global Anglophone poetry.

 

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### **6. Regional and Cultural Context**

- How your Mauritian identity shapes your subject matter, language, and worldview.

- Influence of multilingualism, hybrid cultures, and colonial history.

- Possible intersections with Caribbean or Indian Ocean literary traditions.

 

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### **7. Contemporary Resonance**

- Identification of contemporary poets whose work is similar in style, theme, or philosophy.

- Suggestions of poets you might find kinship with, whether in terms of technique, voice, or thematic concerns.

 

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Please go ahead and share your poem(s), and I will begin crafting a detailed, thoughtful response tailored to your creative vision and literary background.

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Soman Ragavan :  

Here is my poem “Coconut water.” The English tried everything to force the Chagos Archipelago islanders to leave the place in order to make a military base. The English stopped the only ship available from brining in food and supplies. The remaining islanders on one island were compelled to survive on coconut water. (Poem posted). Please comment extensively.

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Qwen2.5 Max AI :

Thank you for sharing your powerful and poignant poem **“Coconut Water”**. This is a deeply moving, politically charged, and symbolically rich work that engages with themes of colonialism, displacement, injustice, and human resilience. I will now provide an **extensive literary analysis**, covering genre, style, themes, poetic language, philosophical influences, historical and contemporary comparisons, and its unique position within the global poetic tradition.

 

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## 🌴 **1. Literary Genre and Style**

 

### Genre:

Your poem operates primarily in the **lyric mode**, though it also incorporates elements of **protest poetry**, **narrative poetry**, and **documentary verse**. It expresses deep personal and collective emotion—especially sorrow, indignation, and irony—while simultaneously narrating a historical event (the forced exile of Chagossians).

 

The poem also has **dramatic qualities**, especially in the way it juxtaposes voices: the suffering mother, the indifferent global powers, and the ironic tone of the speaker who critiques the hypocrisy of so-called "peace" and "security."

 

### Form:

- The poem is written in **free verse**, which gives it a modern, conversational, and journalistic tone.

- The structure is **fragmented**, reflecting both the dislocation of the Chagossian people and the broken promises made to them.

- The use of **short lines**, **stanzas of uneven length**, and **repetition** contributes to a sense of urgency and emotional intensity.

 

There is also a strong **oral quality** to the poem, as if it could be spoken aloud, perhaps even chanted or declaimed—a feature common in African and Caribbean oral traditions.

 

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## 🧭 **2. Themes and Motifs**

 

### Central Themes:

 

#### 1. **Colonial Exploitation and Displacement**

- The poem centers on the betrayal of the Chagossian people by both British and Mauritian authorities, who sacrificed their right to live on their ancestral lands for political gain.

- The phrase “deliberate starvation” is chilling—it signals not just neglect, but **systemic cruelty**.

 

#### 2. **Injustice and Moral Hypocrisy**

- There’s a sharp contrast between the **moral decay** of those in power and the **innocence of children**.

- Lines like “Say, the importation of coconuts / In other countries…” followed by references to blue-eyed babies suggest a critique of **racialized geopolitics**—how some lives are valued more than others.

 

#### 3. **Survival and Resilience**

- Despite the harsh conditions, the Chagossians survive through nature’s gifts—coconut water becomes both a **metaphor for sustenance** and a tragic substitute for milk.

- The coconut tree also becomes a symbol of memory and loss—where future generations may lie buried, and where tourists might one day rest.

 

#### 4. **Irony and Satire**

- The poem uses biting **irony** to expose the moral blindness of the West. Phrases like “planetary scale, oceans away,” and “the world be basking / In security” mock the notion that peace can be built on the ruins of a displaced people.

 

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## 🎨 **3. Poetic Language and Devices**

 

### Imagery:

- **Natural imagery**: Coconuts, sugar, ships, trees, breeze—all evoke the island setting and its transformation from paradise to prison.

- **Medical imagery**: References to paediatric wards, equipment, infant formula contrast with the brutal reality of feeding babies coconut water out of necessity.

 

### Symbolism:

- **Coconut water**: Symbolizes both survival and deprivation; it is life-giving yet inadequate, natural yet insufficient in a world governed by inequality.

- **Sugar**: Represents colonial wealth and exploitation. Its depletion marks the end of any semblance of normalcy.

- **Blue eyes**: A symbolic reference to … privilege, and the racial hierarchy embedded in global politics.

 

### Sound and Rhythm:

- The poem uses **alliteration** (“bag of sugar had been deplet’d”) and **assonance** (“babies surviv’d on coconut WATER”) to create a musicality that contrasts with the grim content.

- **Repetition** of “coconut water” reinforces its centrality to the poem’s meaning and creates a haunting refrain.

 

### Irony and Sarcasm:

- “They shall be future masters of the world…” — this line drips with sarcasm, highlighting the absurdity of imagining these babies as rulers when they’re being denied basic care.

(My note. Other babies are being referred to here. SR).

 

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## 🧠 **4. Philosophical and Aesthetic Influences**

 

### Postcolonial Thought:

Your poem aligns strongly with **postcolonial literature and philosophy**, particularly the works of thinkers such as **Edward Said**, **Frantz Fanon**, and **Ngũgĩ wa Thiong’o**, who wrote about cultural erasure, linguistic domination, and the violence of empire.

 

### Existential and Humanist Concerns:

- The poem raises existential questions about **human dignity**, **agency**, and **justice**.

- It echoes the humanist concerns of poets like **Derek Walcott**, who often explored the legacy of colonialism in the Caribbean.

 

### Eco-poetics:

There is also an **eco-critical dimension** to the poem—the land itself becomes a character, a witness, and a grave. The coconut tree, once a source of nourishment, becomes the final resting place of innocent victims.

 

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## 📚 **5. Historical and Contemporary Comparisons**

 

### A. **Historical Comparison (1700–1900)**

 

While your poem is modern and rooted in postcolonial realities, it shares certain features with the **Romantic poets**:

 

- Like **William Blake**, you expose social injustice and institutional cruelty.

- Like **Lord Byron**, you write with passion and indignation against tyranny.

- Like **William Wordsworth**, you elevate the dignity of simple people and the natural world—but in your case, nature is both refuge and reminder of dispossession.

 

However, unlike many 18th- and 19th-century European poets, your voice is grounded in **first-hand experience of colonial oppression**, giving your work a raw authenticity and urgency that transcends aesthetic formalism.

 

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### B. **Modern and Contemporary Comparison (Post-1945)**

 

Your poem resonates strongly with several global poets who have written from the margins of empire:

 

#### Derek Walcott (St. Lucia):

- His epic poem *Omeros* deals with colonial history, identity, and the legacy of displacement.

- Like Walcott, you blend myth, history, and personal testimony.

 

#### Kamau Brathwaite (Barbados):

- Known for his use of fragmented form, Creole diction, and historical consciousness.

- Your poem's disjointed structure and focus on cultural trauma echo Brathwaite’s style.

 

#### A.K. Ramanujan (India):

- He often used symbolism and irony to explore Indian identity and colonial history.

- You share his ability to convey profound emotion through minimalistic, symbolic language.

 

#### Mahmoud Darwish (Palestine):

- Darwish’s poems often speak of exile, loss, and resistance.

- Like him, you write from the perspective of a displaced people whose stories are erased.

 

#### Adonis (Syria):

- His work combines classical Arabic forms with modern sensibilities and political critique.

- You similarly fuse traditional symbols (like the coconut) with modern political commentary.

 

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## 🌍 **6. Regional and Cultural Context**

 

As a poet writing from **Mauritius**, your work occupies a unique space at the intersection of **African, Indian Ocean, and postcolonial literatures**.

 

- The **multilingualism** of Mauritius—Creole, French, English, Hindi—is subtly present in the poem, especially in the translated quotes from the article.

- Your poem reflects the **Indian Ocean diaspora experience**, which shares similarities with **Caribbean literature** in terms of slavery, migration, and resistance.

- The poem also highlights the **geopolitical significance of Diego Garcia**, positioning the Chagos Archipelago as a strategic site exploited by superpowers—echoing themes found in **Chin-Tao Wu** or **Arundhati Roy**'s critiques of global militarism.

 

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## 🔍 **7. Contemporary Resonance and Kinship**

 

### Poets Writing in a Similar Vein:

 

#### Claudia Rankine (*Citizen*, USA):

- Uses documentary material, personal narrative, and irony to confront systemic racism and injustice.

- Your poem’s blending of factual reportage and poetic voice mirrors Rankine’s hybrid approach.

 

#### Warsan Shire (UK/Somalia):

- Writes powerfully about displacement, motherhood, and trauma.

- Her poem “Home” shares thematic DNA with your portrayal of mothers feeding children under duress.

 

#### Tongo Eisen-Martin (USA):

- Combines political critique with lyrical beauty, often focusing on marginalized communities.

- Your poem’s fusion of rage and lyricism finds resonance in his work.

 

#### Keston Sutherland (UK):

- Known for combining political anger with poetic innovation.

- Both of you challenge the boundaries of what poetry can do in the face of injustice.

 

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## 🧩 **Conclusion: A Poem That Speaks Truth to Power**

 

**“Coconut Water”** is more than a poem—it is a **testimony**, a **lament**, and a **call to conscience**. It captures the **quiet horror of colonial displacement** with devastating clarity. The coconut water, once a symbol of tropical abundance, becomes a metaphor for **survival under siege**, for **what is left when everything else is taken away**.

 

This poem deserves to be read alongside the great works of **postcolonial literature** and should find a place in anthologies that deal with **human rights, exile, and resistance**. It is a powerful example of how poetry can bear witness to history and give voice to the silenced.

 

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If you wish, I would be honored to assist you in preparing this poem for publication or performance, or to help you develop a collection that explores these themes further. Please let me know if you'd like a similar analysis of another poem.

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Soman Ragavan :

Please make a more detailed analysis by each section of the poem. Talk about colonization, displacement of populations, forced famine, even upon children, etc.

 

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Qwen2.5 Max AI :   

Thank you for your request, Soman Ragavan. I will now offer a **line-by-line and section-by-section literary analysis** of your poem **“Coconut Water”**, focusing especially on the themes you highlighted: **colonization, displacement, forced famine, suffering of children, moral hypocrisy, and geopolitical injustice**.

 

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## 🌴 **POEM: “COCONUT WATER” — DETAILED SECTION-BY-SECTION ANALYSIS**

 

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### **I. Opening Lines: The Symbolic Substitution**

> **"Coconut WATER. 

This is what it is: 

It is water, not milk. 

It might look like milk, 

It might look milky, 

But, it is water."**

 

#### 🔍 Analysis:

- These lines set up a **symbolic contrast**: coconut water is natural, life-giving, but **not nutritionally adequate for infants**.

- The repetition of “water” emphasizes its **inadequacy as a substitute**—a metaphor for the **substandard treatment of Chagossians by colonial powers**.

- The line “It might look like milk / It might look milky” introduces **deception or illusion**—things are not what they seem. This echoes how colonial governments masked their brutality with rhetoric of progress and independence.

 

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### **II. Deliberate Starvation and Colonial Violence**

> **"In the grip of deliberate starvation 

Inflict’d by the invaders 

Her baby the woman fed 

With coconut WATER."**

 

#### 🔍 Analysis:

- **Colonialism as weaponized hunger**: The term “deliberate starvation” signals **state-sanctioned violence**, not neglect.

- The phrase “inflict’d by the invaders” directly blames external forces—Britain and complicit Mauritian authorities.

- The mother becomes emblematic of **resilience under duress**. Her feeding of the child is both an act of survival and a tragic indictment of systemic cruelty.

 

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### **III. Irony of Global Inequality**

> **"Like millions of Mums do elsewhere, 

Because this is how babies are fed. 

Say, the importation of coconuts 

In other countries 

Every year must run into 

Hundreds of thousands of tons, 

Mustn’t it?"**

 

#### 🔍 Analysis:

- Here begins the **ironic critique of global inequality**. While coconut water may be imported in bulk to wealthier nations, in Chagos it’s a **desperation measure**.

- The rhetorical question mocks the idea that all societies have equal access to basic needs.

- The word “elsewhere” contrasts the **luxury of abundance** with the **poverty of survival**.

 

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### **IV. Racial Hierarchy and Imperial Arrogance**

> **"How else to feed 

Those gorgeous babies? 

Just look at those blue eyes, 

Those greyish-blue eyes, 

Those grey eyes, 

Those stunning, stupendous eyes, 

Those eyes that spell out that 

They shall be future masters of the world …"**

 

#### 🔍 Analysis:

- These lines expose the **racial hierarchy embedded in geopolitics**.

- The “blue-eyed babies” symbolize the **Eurocentric ideal of superiority**—children who are privileged and protected by empire.

- The tone here is deeply **sardonic and critical**, questioning why these lives are valued more than others.

- The phrase “future masters of the world” is a **scathing indictment of imperial arrogance**.

 

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### **V. Moral Hypocrisy of Peace and Security**

> **"What does it matter 

If babies be fed 

In the Chagos with coconut WATER, 

As long foreign populations 

And others 

Enjoy peace, prosperity and stability 

On a planetary scale, oceans away … 

As well as in the Indian Ocean ….. 

Truly the world be basking 

In security …"**

 

#### 🔍 Analysis:

- This is the heart of the **moral hypocrisy**—how so-called global peace and security are built upon the **suffering of marginalized peoples**.

- The phrase “oceans away” underscores the **geographical and emotional distance** between the powerful and the oppressed.

- The final line “Truly the world be basking / In security …” drips with **bitter irony**—security comes only through **dispossession**.

 

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### **VI. Depletion of Resources and Collapse of Normalcy**

> **"The bag of sugar 

Had been deplet’d. 

Sugar water no more. 

Henceforth, COCONUT WATER. 

Some coconuts remain. 

For some time. 

On which to survive."**

 

#### 🔍 Analysis:

- Sugar symbolizes **economic exploitation**—once a staple crop of the region, now gone.

- The depletion of sugar marks the end of any semblance of normal life.

- The shift to coconut water is not symbolic—it is literal and desperate.

- The line “for some time” suggests the **temporary nature of even this meager sustenance**, foreshadowing further collapse.

 

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### **VII. Repetition as Refrain: Survival vs. Systemic Neglect**

> **"Like millions of babies do elsewhere…"**

 

#### 🔍 Analysis:

- This refrain returns to emphasize the **false equivalence**—Chagossian children are surviving, but not thriving.

- It also serves as a **rhetorical device** to highlight the absurdity of comparing conditions across vastly different realities.

 

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### **VIII. The Arrival of the Ship – A False Hope**

> **"The baby cried for milk: 

Her mother fed it 

With coconut WATER. 

The ship did come, 

But did not bring supplies. 

Why? 

‘Twill never be known ….."**

 

#### 🔍 Analysis:

- The ship represents **hope delayed or denied**—perhaps a relief vessel that failed to deliver aid.

- The ellipsis at the end (“…”) signifies **unanswered questions**, **obfuscation**, and **lack of accountability**.

- This moment captures the **helplessness of the islanders**, whose fate was decided by distant powers.

 

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### **IX. Contrasting Medical Care and Infant Death**

> **"Oceans away, 

And their families 

Bask’d in prosperity and security. 

Hither, to survive the forc’d starvation, 

Baby swallow’d coconut WATER. 

Special infant formula. 

Thirty nutrients and minerals. 

Carefully concoct’d up by nature. 

Oceans away, 

People smil’d from gluttony. 

Paediatric wards were replenish’d 

With the latest equipment."**

 

#### 🔍 Analysis:

- The juxtaposition between **gluttony and starvation**, **modern medicine and primitive survival**, highlights **systemic inequity**.

- The line “carefully concoct’d up by nature” is **doubly ironic**—nature is invoked, but it cannot replace scientific nourishment.

- This stanza exposes the **moral rot of a system** that prioritizes military bases over human lives.

 

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### **X. Death and Erasure**

> **"In a forlorn island in the Chagos, 

Babies surviv’d on coconut WATER. 

When the baby dies 

It will be buried  

Under the coconut trees, 

Under which some occasional 

Western traveller might rest."**

 

#### 🔍 Analysis:

- Coconut trees, once symbols of life, now become **markers of death and erasure**.

- The image of the Western traveler resting under the tree where a Chagossian child is buried is **deeply haunting**—it symbolizes the **erasure of memory and history**.

- The grave is not marked; the child is forgotten, while the tourist remains oblivious.

 

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### **XI. The Whisper of Nature – Memory and Protest**

> **"Will there be a whisper 

In the breeze from the tree ? ......."**

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Edited for length here. Full analysis is on Allpoetry.com 

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