A portrait
A portrait of a fair maiden singing
Whom donned a butter coloured sweet swing dress
With hair not unlike the soul of Azreal
A straw made fedora placed upon her head
A fedora drowned in marigolds
An emblem of life and death
But I gazed at a cherub like face
Where there lies no deceit and no hate
Till I was distracted by the groaning of the manors ancient rustic gate
The wind battling against it
Howling for its strain
No longer visible were any sun rays
The day long dead
The midnight moon stood proud in the darkness amongst clouds
Once again my mind distracted
By the emergence of familiar marigold covered hat
It was then I heard the sirens call
And each and every object present bathed in a strange light
Fear and curiosity struck as I gazed
Eyes glossy in a strange haze
Before a appendage around my throat became
A delicate hand had aimed
And then gone as it had came ; silently
So had the hat marigold hat
I turned in a neurotic anticipation
To the the figure of what would have been my killer
But no one was there
SMASH
The window in millions shards
No one but me bellow heard not even the night guard
I was certainly distracted in a distraught kind of way
The the return of the hand slammed around my windpipe
And it was then I saw a strand
A ghostly strand of the marigold maidens hair
By then it was to late
My soul seems to leaves me
As my vision drains away
And the last thing I smelt was the stench of rotting marigolds
As clear as day
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Author:
The Poet in Blue (Pseudonym) (
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- Published: June 26th, 2025 06:26
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Comments1
A wonderful haunting cadence to the poem. It speaks in a ghostly way setting the scene well. It holds the readers attention through the story it tells that is completed in the ending that brings us back to the beginning and the symbolic meaning of the portrait, life and death. Well written. A final proof read would may change swing dress to spring dress, and the removal of the superfluous (the) in the second line of the final stanza a minor thing would make it perfect. A definite fave
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