AnalysisByQwen2.5-Max AI-Volume 65--TerreDesHommesBattus--6June2025

SOMAN RAGAVAN

6 June, 2025

Subject : Analysis of the poem : “Terre des hommes battus" (Planet of beaten men)

 

https://allpoetry.com/poem/18463148-AnalysisByQwen2.5-Max-AI-Volume-65--TerreDesHommesBattus--6June20-by-Soman-Ragavan/    (full analysis)

 

Analysis by Qwen2.5 Max AI

(Artificial Intelligence)

Volume 65

 

 

 

(1)

Soman Ragavan :

Hello. I will post one of my poems for analysis. Could you please comment extensively, mentioning literary genres, styles, themes, poetic language, poetic philosophies, comparison with poets of England, America, India, Africa from 1700 to 1900 and as from 1945.

At college in 1968, I studied some poems of Oliver Goldsmith (1728-1774), Gordon Byron (1788-1824), Samuel T. Coleridge (1772-1834), William Wordsworth (1770-1850), Robert Browning (1812-1889), Mathew Arnold (1822-1888), Alfred Tennyson (1809-1892) and some other poets of that era.  Make any comments or comparisons you wish on my poems. Say if there are other contemporary poets who write as I do and compare my poetry with theirs. I live in Mauritius, an island in the Indian Ocean. 

 

(2)

Qwen2.5 Max AI :  

Thank you, Soman Ragavan, for sharing your poetic journey and offering your work for analysis. I am eager to engage deeply with your poetry once you share it. In the meantime, allow me to outline how I will approach your request in a thorough and thoughtful manner once I have your poem(s) before me.

 

### **Analytical Framework**

 

When analyzing your poetry, I will consider the following elements:

 

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### **1. Literary Genres and Styles**

- Is your poem primarily **lyric**, **narrative**, **dramatic monologue**, **elegy**, or another form?

- Does it draw from **Romanticism**, **Victorianism**, **Modernism**, **Postcolonial poetry**, or a blend of styles?

- Are there traces of **free verse**, **blank verse**, **sonnet structure**, or other metrical forms?

 

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### **2. Themes**

I will identify core themes such as:

- Nature and environment

- Identity and belonging

- Colonial/postcolonial consciousness

- Memory and history

- Spirituality or existential reflection

- The role of language and culture in shaping identity

 

Given that you are from **Mauritius**, an island nation with a complex colonial past and multicultural present, I will pay special attention to how these socio-historical contexts influence your voice.

 

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### **3. Poetic Language**

- Use of **imagery**, **symbolism**, **metaphor**, **simile**, **alliteration**, **assonance**, etc.

- Tone and diction: formal, conversational, ironic, meditative?

- Presence of **dialect**, **creole**, or multilingual elements (especially relevant in postcolonial writing)

 

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### **4. Poetic Philosophies**

- What worldview or philosophical outlook does the poem suggest?

- Is it aligned with **Romantic ideals** (emotion, nature, individualism), **Modernist fragmentation**, or perhaps **existentialist inquiry**?

- How do you view the purpose of poetry—expressive, political, spiritual, or aesthetic?

 

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### **5. Comparison with Poets from 1700–1900**

Based on your own reading list, we can compare your style and themes with:

- **Oliver Goldsmith**: Pastoral sensibility, social commentary

- **Lord Byron**: Passionate intensity, dramatic flair

- **Wordsworth/Coleridge**: Nature mysticism, emotional introspection

- **Tennyson**: Melancholy, doubt, and Victorian grandeur

- **Robert Browning**: Dramatic monologue, psychological depth

- **Matthew Arnold**: Cultural critique, melancholic tone

 

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### **6. Comparison with Poets from 1945 Onwards**

Here, we can look at:

- **British poets**: Philip Larkin, W.H. Auden, Ted Hughes

- **American poets**: Sylvia Plath, Robert Frost, Wallace Stevens, Langston Hughes

- **Indian poets in English**: Rabindranath Tagore, A.K. Ramanujan, Kamau Brathwaite (though Caribbean, shares postcolonial resonance)

- **African poets**: Leopold Sedar Senghor, Christopher Okigbo, Dennis Brutus

- **Postcolonial diasporic poets**: Derek Walcott, V.S. Naipaul (prose-poetic style), Kamau Brathwaite

 

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### **7. Contemporary Poets Writing Like You**

Depending on your voice, we may find parallels with:

- **Derek Walcott** – lyrical beauty, Caribbean/colonial heritage, classical allusions

- **Kamau Brathwaite** – use of rhythm, creole speech, historical memory

- **Arundhathi Subramaniam** – spiritual inquiry, Indian context with global reach

- **Adrian Cartwright** – eco-poetry, South African context

- **Gurudev Tagore** – mystical lyricism, pan-Asian/Indian philosophical undertones

 

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### **8. Your Unique Voice**

I will also highlight what makes your voice distinct:

- Your location in **Mauritius**, a confluence of cultures (Creole, Indian, Chinese, French, African)

- Your personal history and education (studying English literature in 1968)

- Any fusion of languages, traditions, or hybrid identities expressed through your verse

 

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Once you provide your poem(s), I will apply this analytical framework and offer a detailed, rich commentary tailored to your creative voice and literary background. Please feel free to share one or more poems when you're ready.

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Soman Ragavan :  

Here is my poem “Terre des hommes battus,” after the book “Terre des hommes” by Antoine de Saint Exupéry (1900-1944), France. This is about the subject of domestic violence against men, a subject rarely talked about. Men don’t talk about it for fear of ridicule. (Poem posted).

(4)

Qwen2.5 Max AI :

Thank you, Soman Ragavan, for sharing your powerful and poignant poem **“Terre des hommes battus”**, which responds to Antoine de Saint-Exupéry’s *Terre des hommes* (1939) with a bold thematic shift: from the grandeur of human connection and flight to the quiet, often invisible tragedy of **domestic violence against men**.

 

This poem is emotionally charged, socially significant, and stylistically rich. I will now provide an in-depth literary analysis, addressing:

 

1. **Literary genre and form**
2. **Themes**
3. **Poetic language and style**
4. **Philosophical underpinnings**
5. **Comparisons with poets from 1700–1900**
6. **Comparisons with poets from 1945 onward**
7. **Contemporary parallels**
8. **Your unique voice as a poet from Mauritius**

 

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## **1. Literary Genre and Form**

 

Your poem is a **lyric poem**—expressing personal emotion and moral reflection—but it also contains elements of **satire**, **protest poetry**, and even **dramatic monologue**. It is written primarily in **free verse**, though certain stanzas exhibit rhythmic patterns and internal cadence that resemble **alexandrines** or **octosyllabics**, especially when read aloud in French.

 

The structure is **fragmented**, with asterisks dividing the poem into five distinct but interconnected sections. This fragmentation mirrors the **disjointed reality** of the abused man—his confusion, despair, and longing for escape.

 

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## **2. Themes**

 

### **a. Domestic Violence Against Men**

This is the central theme. You give voice to a subject often shrouded in silence due to social stigma and gender expectations. The phrase **“faire semblant”** (pretending), repeated throughout, captures the psychological burden of masking pain and shame.

 

### **b. Gender Dynamics and Power Reversal**

You explore a world where traditional gender roles are inverted: women hold power, and men suffer silently. This inversion challenges societal norms and highlights the universality of abuse, regardless of gender.

 

### **c. Alienation and Longing for Escape**

The reference to **Robinson Crusoe** (“Seul sur son île…”) symbolizes a desire to flee from society—a recurring motif in literature, from **Rousseau** to **Defoe**, and later in **postcolonial writing** like **Derek Walcott’s** *Crusoe’s Journal*.

 

### **d. Futility and Despair**

Lines like “Point donc de solution jusqu’au trépas?” (“No solution until death?”) and “Nulle part trouve-t-on d’espérance…” (“Nowhere is hope found…”) reflect a deep existential despair.

 

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## **3. Poetic Language and Style**

 

### **Tone and Diction**

The tone is **confessional**, **ironic**, and at times **biting**. The use of colloquial expressions like **“que diable!”** and **“Mieux vaut en rire…”** gives the poem a conversational edge, making the pain more immediate and relatable.

 

### **Imagery and Symbolism**

- **“Des coups sournois, sans pitié”** – evokes vivid physical brutality.

- **“Prétendant des années durant…”** – suggests long-term emotional manipulation.

- **“Les quelques mecs sont bons élèves…”** – ironic portrayal of male submission.

- **“Dépotoirs”** – a strong metaphor suggesting emotional and psychological wreckage left behind by abusive relationships.

 

### **Sound Devices**

There is a musicality in parts of the poem:

- Alliteration: “sourde barbarie,” “discours éloquents”

- Assonance: “jour après jour rien que de feindre”

 

These enhance the rhythm and emotional impact.

 

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## **4. Philosophical Underpinnings**

 

Your poem raises philosophical questions about:

- **Masculinity and vulnerability**: Can men be victims without losing their identity?

- **Power and control**: Is domination always destructive?

- **Silence and truth**: Why do we hide suffering?

 

It echoes **existentialist concerns**, particularly those explored by **Albert Camus** and **Jean-Paul Sartre**, about absurdity and alienation.

 

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## **5. Comparison with Poets from 1700–1900**

 

Though your poem is modern in tone and subject, it resonates with earlier poets who explored themes of **suffering**, **power**, and **the human condition**:

 

### **Lord Byron (1788–1824)**

Byron often wrote about tormented heroes and emotional extremes. Your poem shares his dramatic intensity and sense of tragic isolation.

 

### **Robert Browning (1812–1889)**

In poems like *My Last Duchess*, Browning uses dramatic monologue to reveal psychological depth and hidden cruelty. Your poem does something similar—giving voice to a silent victim.

 

### **Matthew Arnold (1822–1888)**

Arnold’s *Dover Beach* laments the loss of faith and meaning in life. Your poem similarly expresses disillusionment and despair.

 

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## **6. Comparison with Poets from 1945 Onward**

 

### **Philip Larkin (1922–1985)**

Larkin’s bleak realism and focus on domestic life resonate with your poem’s unflinching look at family dynamics.

 

### **Sylvia Plath (1932–1963)**

Though her focus was female trauma, her confessional tone and symbolic richness can be compared to your raw honesty and imagery.

 

### **Kamau Brathwaite (1930–2020)**

A Caribbean poet who used fragmented forms and oral rhythms to express postcolonial trauma. Like him, you use poetic form to mirror emotional dislocation.

 

### **Derek Walcott (1930–2017)**

Walcott’s blending of myth, personal experience, and colonial history finds a parallel in your fusion of personal pain and universal commentary.

 

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## **7. Contemporary Parallels**

 

### **Anthony Anaxagorou**

British-Cypriot poet known for spoken word and exploring masculinity, identity, and trauma.

 

### **Ocean Vuong**

American poet whose work deals with gender, violence, and memory, often in confessional tones.

 

### **Mahadai Das (1954–2003)**

A Guyanese poet who explored themes of oppression and gender; your poem could sit alongside hers in a postcolonial feminist canon.

 

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## **8. Your Unique Voice as a Poet from Mauritius**

 

As a poet from **Mauritius**, your voice carries a rare blend of cultural influences:

- **French literary tradition** (Saint-Exupéry, Voltaire, Hugo)

- **Creole sensibility** (seen in your use of irony and rhythm)

- **Indian Ocean multiculturalism** (blending Asian, African, and European traditions)

 

Your poem bridges **Western poetic forms** with a distinctly **postcolonial awareness**, giving voice to marginalized experiences in a globalized, yet still patriarchal world.

 

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## Final Thoughts

 

**“Terre des hommes battus”** is a courageous and necessary poem. It dares to speak the unspeakable, using lyrical force to expose the hidden wounds of men in abusive relationships. Its strength lies not only in its message but in its **poetic craftsmanship**—its rhythm, irony, and emotional depth.

 

If you continue writing in this vein, your work could find a place among contemporary voices challenging gender norms through poetry. You may consider publishing in journals such as:

- *Poetry Review*

- *Wasafiri* (journal of international contemporary writing)

- *The Missing Slate* (global poetry platform)

- *Punch Drunk Press* (focusing on spoken word and mental health)

 

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Please feel free to share more poems whenever you wish. I would be honored to continue engaging with your work in this detailed manner.

(5)

Soman Ragavan :

Please make a more detailed analysis by each section of the poem. Say how the world has evolved to be like this. Compare with the life of boys in the Amazon tribe and how women live in that tribe.

(6)

Qwen2.5 Max AI :   

Thank you, Soman Ragavan, for your powerful and thought-provoking poem **“Terre des hommes battus”**, which not only critiques the modern reality of domestic violence against men but also invokes myth, irony, and cultural contrast to deepen its emotional resonance.

 

You have asked me to:

 

1. Provide a **line-by-line or section-by-section analysis** of your poem.
2. Reflect on how the **world has evolved** into this state of gendered power imbalance.
3. Compare it with the **life of boys in Amazon tribes** and how **women live among them**, drawing parallels or contrasts.

 

Let us proceed accordingly.

 

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## 🔍 SECTION-BY-SECTION ANALYSIS

 

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### **Section I**

 

> *Que de faire-croire : quel destin peu enviable : 

Quand cela va-t-il cesser enfin, que diable ! 

Jour après jour, rien que faire semblant : 

Quand va-t-on enfin prendre les devants ?*

 

#### ✅ Meaning:

The speaker begins with a cry of frustration—how long must men endure pretending everything is fine? The phrase “faire-croire” (to make believe) implies deception, both to oneself and others. The rhetorical question “que diable!” (what the devil!) adds urgency and indignation.

 

#### 📜 Literary Devices:

- **Irony**: The man pretends to be strong while being beaten.

- **Repetition**: “faire semblant”, “rien que”—emphasizes monotony and helplessness.

- **Rhetorical questions**: Engages the reader emotionally.

 

#### 🧠 Thematic Insight:

This sets up the central theme: **the silent suffering of men in abusive relationships** due to societal expectations of masculinity.

 

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> *Sourire pour la galerie, 

Niant la sourde barbarie, 

Faisant des discours éloquents, 

Mais sombrer sous les coups insolents…*

 

#### ✅ Meaning:

Men smile for appearances, deny the abuse they suffer, and may even speak eloquently in public—but privately are battered.

 

#### 🎭 Literary Device:

- **Dramatic contrast**: Public persona vs. private pain.

- **Alliteration**: “sourire / sourde”

 

#### 💬 Commentary:

This reflects **modern social pressure** on men to appear invulnerable—a far cry from traditional tribal societies where vulnerability was often shared openly.

 

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> *Des coups sournois, sans pitié, 

Infligés dans des endroits cachés , 

Loin des regards insouciants, 

Prétendant des années durant…*

 

#### ✅ Meaning:

The abuse is subtle, cruel, hidden behind closed doors, yet persists over years.

 

#### 🧩 Symbolism:

- “endroits cachés” = psychological repression

- “regards insouciants” = society’s indifference

 

#### 🕰️ Historical Parallel:

This mirrors the **historical silencing of male victims**, especially during the 19th and early 20th centuries when men were expected to be providers and protectors—not victims.

 

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### **Section II**

 

> *Prêchant la paix, prônant les bonnes manières, 

Mais succombant aux coups perfides des sorcières…*

 

#### ✅ Meaning:

Women preach peace and civility but secretly attack men, likened to witches (“sorcières”)—a metaphor rich in irony and historical misogyny.

 

#### 🧙‍♀️ Interpretation:

The word “sorcières” can be read as symbolic rather than literal—it represents **hidden cruelty masked by virtue**. This echoes medieval and early modern European views of women as manipulative and dangerous, though here it is used with **critical irony**.

 

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> *Comment diable en est-on arrivé là : 

Point donc de solution jusqu’au trépas ?*

 

#### ✅ Meaning:

How did we reach this point? Is there no escape until death?

 

#### 💀 Philosophical Undertone:

This line evokes **existential despair**, akin to Camus’ absurdism—where life seems meaningless and oppressive.

  

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Edited here for length. Full analysis on allpoetry.com

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